There is a trend of increasing amount of noise in our life. Why could this be a problem? What can be done to reduce it? Give your own opinion support it by examples.
There are different noise levels we humans face everyday. Some sounds are very amusing like the cuckoos voice which please our ears. However, some noises are very painful and give duress in our minds such as car honks or tapping of shoes. I will discuss both problems and solutions to mitigate them.
One of the major problem of increasing the noise level is growing the number of heavy industries. They do not only contribute in dirt pollution but noise pollution as well. For example, automobiles are in great demand these days because they have become the necessity of every human. Therefore, the car manufacturers are producing more and more vehicles in order to meet those needs. Eventually, if more cars have been introduced means more factories need to be established which means more noise problems will occur.
In order to reduce such noises, government need to take stern actions. Firstly, they are required to analyze the population through the consensus method then calculate the number of vehicles to identify the total cars which are running on the roads and how many cars each family is owning. After completed the evaluation, a policy need to be established for those individual families who would have more than one vehicle. This policy should clearly be stated about the fine charged for keeping more than one vehicle. This will indirectly hit the car factories and force them to manufacture less cars or other automobiles which ultimately will help the noises to come down.
Though, this is one of the problem and solution provided above of growing noise levels. However, there are many other issues that need to be tackled. This starts from telephone rings to late night concerts or musical events. To diminish them the government need to monitor these activities closely and take the action accordingly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun cars is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...factories and force them to manufacture less cars or other automobiles which ultimat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05280528053 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48158045744 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580858085809 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9166567531 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0555555556 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15130657226 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489277659225 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03653458455 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956708267362 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00935155553348 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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