Things like puzzles, board games and pictures can contribute to a child’s development. What would you give a child to help him/her develop and why? Give details and examples in your explanation
A child's mind is like an empty disc. They will pick the things and store them in their memory quicker than the adults. As the child grown up to infant stage, they are often attracted by the different things such as animated pictures. Likewise, when they move from infant period to teenage one other games like puzzles board games or other intellectual games pull them near. These intellectual games not only keep them busy but also allow them to think outside the box. There are other things which also help children to develop their skills which are set out below.
To embark upon, children are fascinated by movies specially the cartoon movies. Most of these animated movies teach lesson of brotherhood, humanity, cooperation and love. For instance, one of the most favorite cartoon of all time tom and jerry they often fight with each other but when anyone of them is in trouble the other one run for his help. This program helps to learn essential message of brotherhood and humanity.
Additionally, physical development is as important as mental development. The concept of healthy life is much require to for children to understand in their early stage. Parents always try to make their baby feed the best nutrition food to keep them stronger. Likewise, the idea of staying healthy should remain intact throughout their learning stage. For example, parents habits of eating unhygienic or junk food leading their children to follow the same routine. Therefore, parents play a vital role in terms of keeping the environment as healthy as possible.
To elucidate, parents are the pioneer of their kids, therefore, they are deem to take every necessary step to help their child to develop. Also, government should also keep the stern check on the policies to ensure that the every child is receiving right education and proper attention.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00324675325 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45518742034 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584415584416 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4615677758 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6111111111 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121148590109 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398393423865 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420399417536 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0720752176464 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548275859527 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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