Today children spend little free time with their parents.Why is it the case.What are the consequence
It is a fact that in these days pupils allocate a large amount of time on technical gadgets instead of communicating with their parents. There are numerous potential reasons for this phenomenon and greater impacts are brought by this trend on the lives of toddlers.
On the one hand, there are various contributing factors in creating communication gap between guardians and their offsprings. Firstly, nowadays youngsters are under the great influence of modernization as they spend almost whole day in front of computer or television screen in order to play video games or to watch movies. Therefore, care takers do not get the chance to strike conversations with their kids. Secondly, both genders are working in today’s cut throat competition as inflation is increasing with the passage of time and all family member pursue professions to contribute in the household wealth. Consequently, due to their hectic schedule, they are unable to give time to their kids and spend all the precious time on completing important projects at workplace. Finally, younger people and adults have their own tastes and preferences as infants tend to live their life in their own way and do not allow others to interfere in their decisions. Aa a result, having distinctive priorities and interests among children and their parents restrict them to communicate with each other.
On the other hand, according to my perception, communication gal among guardians and their children can have considerable negative implications for the behaviour of pupils. First of all, in the early age children are innocent and governed by their parents as their decision making and problem solving skills are not fully developed in younger age. So, if they will not keep in touch with their parents, they would not know what are the norms of society as well as what is acceptable or unacceptable. Besides this, being experienced and skilled, senior citizens can instil important values and virtues to youngsters as they can share their wisdom and stories behind their success which will inspire them to succeed in life. That is why, without spending time with elders, children would be deprived of the moral values. Last but not least, talking with parents endures the overall development of young ones as they imitate the actions of their parents as they watch and they act as their role models. As a consequent, they acquire etiquettes from them. However, living away from them may make them rude and aggressive and also some violent movies encourage them to indulge in the bad company.
To conclude, although owing to automation children spend a lot of time on browsing social websites and they do not communicate with parents, it is a negative development for children and affects their life in many ways as aforementioned.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2347.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 458.0 315.596192385 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12445414847 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77330482572 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 176.041082164 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56768558952 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 712.8 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.7672197111 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.388888889 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4444444444 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300056563471 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968163492847 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630179640513 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184737371135 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061693575836 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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