Today more and more cities are being rebuilt and redesigned in order to be modernized. What are advantages and disadvantages of this trend.
Owing to housing as well as traffic problems in old cities, authorities have been renovating these urban areas to provide better amenities and lifestyle to the people. While the redesigning of cities influenced its inhabitants in a very positive way, however, at the same time, its few disadvantages cannot be overlooked. This essay will highlight both merits and demerits of this trend.
First and foremost, there are number of changes like conversion of horizontal housing infrastructure into vertical one, widening of roads, amelioration of sewage system by installing big pipes and all have been done to tackle the issues faced by most of the old cities. Firstly, as with increasing population, there is a need of more houses for people who are coming to cities to earn their livelihood. However, horizontal construction of houses needs more space and to counteract this, construction of vertical buildings and or skyscrapers is gaining ground. Furthermore, more people in city means more vehicles on roads which further catalyze the need of wider roads. Hence, widening the existing roads is also a major part of the renovation which tackle road congestion effectively.
On the contrary, there are some unfavorable effects of this trend on society. Firstly, generally people are living in communities in old cities, whereas, the renovation scatter that community people in different places which really impact the social satisfaction of individual as he might be losing relationships with their neighbors and other community members. Moreover, in modern high rise apartments, people have to bear more cost as these building are more expensive as compare to their old houses.
To conclude, although there are few negative aspects associated with modernization of cities, advantages are increasingly more and it an inevitable change to meet the needs of citizens of these cities.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'really', 'so', 'well', 'whereas', 'while', 'as to', 'as well as', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.275757575758 0.247107183377 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.133333333333 0.155533422707 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10303030303 0.0946595960268 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0575757575758 0.0501214627716 115% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0212121212121 0.0437548338989 48% => OK
Prepositions: 0.130303030303 0.122226691241 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0484848484848 0.0403226058552 120% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.9554458777 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0333333333333 0.0326793684256 102% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0787878787879 0.0861772015684 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00909090909091 0.021408717616 42% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0151515151515 0.011925033212 127% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1891.0 1933.35771543 98% => OK
No of words: 296.0 316.048096192 94% => OK
Chars per words: 6.38851351351 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.408783783784 0.374742101984 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.304054054054 0.28420135186 107% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.239864864865 0.203846283523 118% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.168918918919 0.137316102897 123% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9554458777 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.037074148 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601351351351 0.56093040696 107% => OK
Word variations: 66.4729455397 60.7387585426 109% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 24.6666666667 20.7743622355 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.0228592283 49.517814964 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.583333333 127.492653851 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7743622355 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.41666666667 0.814263465372 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 55.0720720721 49.1944974215 112% => OK
Elegance: 2.14285714286 1.69124875643 127% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395405634164 0.332605444948 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0970714965191 0.102741220458 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0536060746271 0.0668466124924 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.561634859719 0.534860350844 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.176274047222 0.148594505496 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169055978539 0.134430193775 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749308951249 0.0742795772207 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.297598030108 0.324371583561 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0459804953094 0.0638462369009 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281637367056 0.228012699653 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308712531901 0.058150111329 53% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.