Travel to study is over rated, we have brilliant scholars who studied locally. Is travel really required for higher studies?
Education has become one of the basic necessity in life. People seek to move abroad for acquiring advance studies. No doubt that great scholars are produced in every country but the real effort for that country is to encourage them to stay and serve in the same country.
Some people pursue higher studies in foreign countries where they are welcome with offering the scholarships. While the foreign countries are well aware about the increasing number of students they are inviting them to study in their country and perhaps they also know the fact that some of them while never coming back to their origin country and get permanent settlement after availing the advance education. Why still foreign countries allow them to study in their country and also provide them scholarships to study with no or little cost of whole education? The answer is they know the fact that these people will proved to be the great asset for them which eventually help these countries to bring more revenues and great reputation.
On the other hand, people elect to study other countries rather than local countries because they do not get enough opportunity to enhance their study skills and if they do then they have to pay their own education expenses. Even after finishing the education, they suffer from job opportunities and often find themselves on the street rusting off their shoes to find a reputable job. While on the other hand, foreign countries not only offer scholarships but also after completing their education they give employment with great perks. Obviously why would not anyone then choose to study abroad.
All an all education is must seek thing which no one can neglect because we all know that education is the only weapon we have to weeded out the poverty and misery from this globe. To keep up with the pace and motivate the talented pupils, government should be cautious about these human trade offs because if every talented person move out from their country then repercussions would be inevitable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 526, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...provide them scholarships to study with no or little cost of whole education? The ...
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Line 3, column 620, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'prove'
Suggestion: prove
...ey know the fact that these people will proved to be the great asset for them which ev...
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Line 5, column 574, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'chooses'.
Suggestion: chooses
...ks. Obviously why would not anyone then choose to study abroad. All an all educatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, then, well, while, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9587020649 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40206763179 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516224188791 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.8226431708 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.307692308 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0769230769 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126936958915 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548784051947 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516478659666 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748466304066 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312020355573 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.