Water is a natural resource that should always be free. Governments should ban the sale of bottled water. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
We are really blessed with many natural resource and of course water is one of them. The main reason we use water is drinking. It is a basic right of every human to utilize the resource that have been offered by this world. Therefore, I am supporting the perception of free water supply and selling bottled water should be abandoned completely.
First of all, why people tend to buy bottled water rather than using tap water? the answer is may be the water supply by the authorities is unhealthy and undrinkable. The governments of underdeveloped countries like Pakistan who are already being questioned about their loyalty towards their nations. They manipulate the system in order to retain profits from these water bottled companies. Their thoughts of providing free water mere remain thoughts or if it is justified then the water does not allow us to drink because it is very dangerous and could produce some fatal consequences and worse causalities may arise. The government play a tremendous role in providing free and clean water. By initiating the banning of water bottles they would serve the nation and help the globe to grow fit and healthy. It is the responsibility of any government to ensure that no company would operate or have a license to sell the water bottle even for minimal cost. Those who find involving in such activities should be fined heave penalties.
To elucidate, this world consist of two third with water and one third with the land. Therefore, it is quite clear that we have enough water to use based on the world population. It is very essential that nobody in this world would left without water and die from the deprivation of thirst. Companies selling water bottles just for the sake of profit must realize that this activity is putting the whole world in massive danger and no wonder if it continues then the third world war would commence for capturing the sea and oceans rather than lands.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, really, so, then, therefore, third, of course, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8313253012 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53984076593 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566265060241 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5471851554 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3529411765 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5294117647 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326132450553 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112313445423 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638986362925 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23214311588 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096668202729 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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