What difficulties will face your country in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
Globalisation is affecting the lives of people all across the globe, some of which are irreversible. Although, intially, these changes have appeared to be positive, they are started proving otherwise. This essay will discuss the challenges or difficulties India will face in coming ten years.
To begin with, the pace of change in people lives brought by industrial revolution and globalisation is unprecedented. Firstly, this brought climate change also known as globalwarming. A term which is unknown to many of us few years back became wellknown to everyone on earch in matter of few years. If industries are continue to operate with fossil fuels as done by today, we are nothing but making sure that we get more natural disasters like frequent foods and raise in sea levels. In order to negate the damage done by industrialization, It is necessary to regrew forests that have been died. Goverments should allocate sufficient funds and set targets in achiving this reforestation targets. it is also necessary fossil fuels with alternatives generated from natural energy sources like sun, wind and waves.
secondly, agriculture methods in the country are deviated from natural ways of farming , so that, If we continue to do so, we just eat pesticides and ___ in alternate forms called food. It is primal to adopt farming techniques such as organic farming and perma culture both of which encourage the use of only natural ways farming.
Lastly, Industrialisation made people to migrate to cities. In coming years cities will overflow with population but the corresponding raise in resources is a doubt. People are using the resources available to them irresponsibly thinking nothing about the future generations. Governments should educate the citizens on mindful consumerism and bring awareness on these issues.
Every citizen has responsibility in making the world a better place to live. If we take all the actions above mentioned the problems can be mitigated to a considerable level.
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It is believed that most
It is believed that most nations will be confronting a number of consequential issues such as environmental changes, rising occupants and lack of adequate schooling facilities with respect to rapid transformations happening in human lifestyle. This essay will put forth the varied obstacles my nation- India, may have to deal with and some of their possible solutions.
India is expected to meet heads-on with severe problems of overpopulation, pollution and substandard educational framework. Firstly, as per current birth rate it is estimated that India will become most populated nation by 2030 and this can result an increase in poverty and hyper inflation. Secondly, outdated teaching methodology focusing on theoretical knowledge is bound to raise unemployment levels. Furthermore, an increasing number of vehicles on roads possess great threat in terms of traffic congestion and air pollution. All these fundamental issues add to the predicament of crime and corruption our homeland is already grappling with.
These are few remedies for these acute problems. First is to raise awareness about family planning and drafting strict policy of one child per family is also suggested to curb the rising birth rate. On educational front, system requires complete overhaul to focus on inclusion of modern practical teaching and inculcate more employment skills. Lastly, it needs to promote use of eco-friendly fuels by incentives and policies along with enhancing the quality and capacity of public transportation system.
In conclusion, massive action on multiple forefronts is required with a strong resolve on educating the masses and thus raising awareness among them. Government and individuals need to work together as a team if India contemplates to build a better futuristic society.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'lastly', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'such as', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.253561253561 0.247107183377 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.185185185185 0.155533422707 119% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0911680911681 0.0946595960268 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.037037037037 0.0501214627716 74% => OK
Pronouns: 0.031339031339 0.0437548338989 72% => OK
Prepositions: 0.128205128205 0.122226691241 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0655270655271 0.0403226058552 163% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.04115007029 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.039886039886 0.0326793684256 122% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0797720797721 0.0861772015684 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.017094017094 0.021408717616 80% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.011396011396 0.011925033212 96% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2002.0 1933.35771543 104% => OK
No of words: 320.0 316.048096192 101% => OK
Chars per words: 6.25625 6.12580529183 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20517956788 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.4 0.374742101984 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.296875 0.28420135186 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.190625 0.203846283523 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.14375 0.137316102897 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04115007029 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.037074148 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621875 0.56093040696 111% => OK
Word variations: 72.8932714235 60.7387585426 120% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.7777777778 20.7743622355 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7537105616 49.517814964 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.222222222 127.492653851 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 20.7743622355 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.814263465372 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.99599198397 150% => OK
Readability: 47.4652777778 49.1944974215 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.76404494382 1.69124875643 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20480122771 0.332605444948 62% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.062771125864 0.102741220458 61% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0573507248789 0.0668466124924 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.491596006173 0.534860350844 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.14179182379 0.148594505496 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747931809931 0.134430193775 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755104657412 0.0742795772207 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.22078591984 0.324371583561 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0488324175229 0.0638462369009 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141346595869 0.228012699653 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669575950402 0.058150111329 115% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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