The world is becoming increasingly globalised, and people who speak more than one language are increasingly in demand in the job market. Therefore, all children should learn a second language.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Learning bilingual is not a fashion in fact it is necessity of life. I, therefore, recommend that every children should be encouraged to learn more than one language to be able to survive in the soaring competition.
To embark upon, many children nowadays are moving abroad for their advance studies. Most of them try to settle themselves in the same country after finishing their education. Though, seeking education only is not enough to spot a good job in a reputable company, therefore, extra skills are always required to make impeccable impression on your employer. In addition to that, looking up at the social medias we often encounter the job advertisements recommending the jobs to those job seekers who have excellent command in different languages. They certainly have an edge over others who have command on single language.
In addition to that, this ability will not only help them to find a better job market but also allow them to adjust in multi-cultural environment. For example, in any multinational company, many employees come from different backgrounds. While understanding their languages ease half of the issues arising due to linguistic differences. It also help them in schools to make good peers.
I believe that not only children should learn multiple languages but adults should also hop in and enticed themselves with the multiple language environment. Those people who do not procrastinate the opportunity always get success in life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help them find' instead.
Suggestion: help them find
...ion to that, this ability will not only help them to find a better job market but also allow them...
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Line 5, column 239, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...loyees come from different backgrounds. While understanding their languages ease half...
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Line 5, column 346, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
... due to linguistic differences. It also help them in schools to make good peers. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27542372881 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95849812341 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627118644068 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7591579595 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7692307692 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1538461538 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191341464475 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565428899612 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557673857475 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121071822464 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608270472609 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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