Write about the following topic.
Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Today media plays an integral role in everybody's lives. Therefore, many adverts that are being broadcasting on television every day, impacting the life of the individuals in both positive and negative ways. Owing to this , a segment of society opines that ads persuade people to buy unessential commodities, while others have opposite views, they think that advertisements are utterly crucial for updating them with new items in the market. However, I believe that ads have more advantageous impact on the society, which I will explain in the coming paragraphs.
Primarly, publishing advertisements on televisions helps to preserve the supreme quality of the product. At present, there is an abundant competition among companies in the global market to sell their goods, consequently, they try to manufacture the fine quality products that can fascinate more folk's attention, eventually would uplift their economy. Therefore, this is fruitful both for civilians as they posses quality materials and also, leads to invention of new technological things in the market.
Moreover, ads provide opportunity to customors to distinguish between the commodities and in making the right choices. Due to broadcasting of ads, people are more aware regarding product's quality, their functioning, pros and cons, which enable them to have the correct identification while buying any product. For example, various mobile phones advertisements help people to pick the desired featured , pocket friendly cell phones. Hence, commercials on televisions are completely beneficial in distinguishing the products.
To conclude, undoubtedly, it is clear that commercials educate the folks by providing detailed information, and enable them to differntiate things efficiently. Nevertheless, it has some disadvanatges like misleading with false details of items,however, quality marking on goods would really protect people from such situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, really, regarding, so, therefore, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79858657244 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21192760139 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65371024735 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2275404009 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.230769231 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136873369307 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04258220238 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407810454025 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078172831907 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0121559674013 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.36 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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