Advances in transportation and communication like the airplane and telephone have changed the way that nations interact with each other in a global society. Choose another technological innovation that you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice.
Technological innovations have changed the world in many aspects, as we can see, nothing is comparable to the past especially in the case of communication. I believe that appearance of internet has created a big evolution in the communication world. In this essay I will highlight three main reasons to support my belief.
First and foremost, the appearance of internet helps us to communicate everybody in everywhere in all the time. Before that, communication was restricted to post and after that to the telephone; but now as soon as we decide to have relationship with a person, can use online chat. As an instance, my brother live in the USA and we can see each other every two years but by using internet we communicate with each other every two days; also I can text him whenever I want.
Another prominent issue is that, by invention of internet as a practical way of communication, the form of relationships have been changed as well. By the use of this effective innovation, lots of social networks have been made which provide us with different shape of activities such as sharing photos at the moment or twitting wonderful movies with our friends all over the world. In my belief even the invention of internet should be considered as a revolution in the world.
The third reason why I advocate this issue is that, all kind of science and technology such as industry, military, education, medicine, pathology and many other fields are highly affected by this evolution, as it enables us to access the previous work and research which have been done several years ago in different part of the world; also, it is possible to do one common research in one of these fields with another person overseas.
To sum up, advent of the internet was a turning point in humankind’s life that makes everything easier for us, therefore, the communication and interactions between nations are also enhanced by these changes.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'third', 'well', 'kind of', 'such as', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.229916897507 0.229887763892 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.135734072022 0.158761421928 85% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0803324099723 0.0866891130778 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0443213296399 0.046263068375 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0554016620499 0.0685040099705 81% => OK
Prepositions: 0.146814404432 0.118717715034 124% => OK
Participles: 0.0415512465374 0.0351676179071 118% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.91844422619 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0249307479224 0.0309702414327 80% => OK
Particles: 0.00277008310249 0.00188951952338 147% => OK
Determiners: 0.113573407202 0.0887237588012 128% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.016620498615 0.0209618222197 79% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0138504155125 0.0139019557991 100% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1934.0 2387.08602151 81% => OK
No of words: 328.0 408.028673835 80% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.89634146341 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.329268292683 0.338922669872 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.262195121951 0.251872472559 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.198170731707 0.174417080927 114% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.143292682927 0.112833075102 127% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91844422619 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.524397521467 107% => OK
Word variations: 60.9033413763 59.2087087015 103% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6684587814 53% => OK
Sentence length: 29.8181818182 20.5533526081 145% => OK
Sentence length SD: 96.3349013761 48.84282405 197% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.818181818 120.699889404 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8181818182 20.5533526081 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.644075263715 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 56.0376940133 45.7405998639 123% => OK
Elegance: 1.77647058824 1.45489161554 122% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328753387644 0.300154397459 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.119650914759 0.103427244359 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0523100599126 0.0752933317313 69% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.68533248637 0.497263757937 138% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.181609584374 0.151897553556 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163256402067 0.114077575197 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04529131082 0.0781384742642 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.310699844347 0.336927656856 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0603933254296 0.067059652881 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22017756846 0.210909579961 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281972988426 0.0618886996521 46% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.6433691756 81% => OK
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30