agree or disagree with this statement
people these days spend more time on personal enjoyments doing things they like to do rather than things they should
The world is changing with very fast pace; so, we are able to see the large number of changes more and more, as we never have thought about them before. Regarding these differences, we are able to see different behavior which are done by people; as a result, people tend to do something they like rather than they should. I have three main reason to show why I have this preference.
First and foremost, family and family training play significant role in bringing up children with special behavior. As I remember, in the past, the role of mother and father were so important, in a way that children had to respect them and consult with them in all things. Unfortunately, these roles have been become colorless today. Children prefer to decide for themselves without even think about something their parents say. We can say new generation are more autonomous.
Another prominent reason is that, educational system, school, college, and university are impressed the personality traits or personal characteristics in children. Children and adolescents are spend most of their time in these places and learn most of rules for lives there, so, the importance of education is not less than family to teach students how should follow some rules even if they are not enjoyable for them.
Last but not least, by passing the time, people will understand that following rules or especial manners are just excessive things to do. Therefore they try to omit them from their lives and just stick to whatever cheers them up or any enjoyable things. Even these behaviors are not acceptable but every day we see too many people that live with their own rules.
To sum up, the role of family and education system in raising children is considerable; in addition, we can count different way of thinking as a third effective factor in peoples’ tendency to do enjoyable things rather than essential tasks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
... children. Children and adolescents are spend most of their time in these places and ...
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Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the rules') or simply say ''most rules''.
Suggestion: most of the rules; most rules
...of their time in these places and learn most of rules for lives there, so, the importance of ...
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Line 4, column 138, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...anners are just excessive things to do. Therefore they try to omit them from their lives ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'regarding', 'so', 'therefore', 'third', 'in addition', 'as a result', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.220055710306 0.229887763892 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.161559888579 0.158761421928 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0974930362117 0.0866891130778 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0612813370474 0.046263068375 132% => OK
Pronouns: 0.066852367688 0.0685040099705 98% => OK
Prepositions: 0.116991643454 0.118717715034 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0306406685237 0.0351676179071 87% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65023399615 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.033426183844 0.0309702414327 108% => OK
Particles: 0.008356545961 0.00188951952338 442% => OK
Determiners: 0.058495821727 0.0887237588012 66% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0139275766017 0.0209618222197 66% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0111420612813 0.0139019557991 80% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1894.0 2387.08602151 79% => OK
No of words: 320.0 408.028673835 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91875 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.3375 0.338922669872 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.240625 0.251872472559 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.18125 0.174417080927 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.13125 0.112833075102 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65023399615 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584375 0.524397521467 111% => OK
Word variations: 64.7787418126 59.2087087015 109% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 22.8571428571 20.5533526081 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7553222662 48.84282405 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.285714286 120.699889404 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.5533526081 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.644075263715 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 46.9196428571 45.7405998639 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.26923076923 1.45489161554 87% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217954278116 0.300154397459 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0759633434718 0.103427244359 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0709189625703 0.0752933317313 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.541480160471 0.497263757937 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.216881585481 0.151897553556 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801831744277 0.114077575197 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580649408538 0.0781384742642 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.221245670559 0.336927656856 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0674473540004 0.067059652881 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132849735144 0.210909579961 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471473688118 0.0618886996521 76% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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