Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.

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Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.

It has long been a hot controversy among people that of the two options of always telling the truth or being conservative which one is more preferable. As far as I am concerned, answering to this question is imperative as it deals with the relationship between people. After serious consideration, I think telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.
The first reason for my propensity is that telling the truth is always the right thing to do. For instance, it is extremely forbidden to lie to someone in most of the religions including Islam. Lying is one of the big sins in so many religions and beliefs like Islam and Christianity. The question is why we should lie when we can tell the truth even in some hard situations. I will exemplify my point with another thing that happened to me. I remember when I was in elementary school, my teacher told the class to ask their parents to come for a meeting. At first, I was afraid to ask my parents because they were working hard all day, so I decided to lie to my teacher that they do not want to come. That night my father who knew that they have to go to school came to me and said, “you have to tell the truth no matter what because you cannot solve your problems with a lie". My parent went to the meeting and I got my first and most important lesson from them to not lie in any circumstances.
The second reason that I should mention is that when somebody lies to you, no matter why, you would never trust him like before. According to a research which was conducted by one of the most reputable universities in my country, the couples which lied to each other for some reasons before marriage have less loyalty and trust to each other. A prime example from my own experiences may shed some light to this point. My uncle had an inveterate habit to lie to people when he wanted to amaze others. Because of that we never trusted him even sometimes when he was talking about a very true thing.
To conclude considering the above reasons, it would be wiser to tell the truth, if you want to have a deep relationship.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 500, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... people when he wanted to amaze others. Because of that we never trusted him even somet...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'another thing', 'even so', 'for instance', 'i think', 'talking about', 'to tell the truth']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.174117647059 0.229887763892 76% => OK
Verbs: 0.171764705882 0.158761421928 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0752941176471 0.0866891130778 87% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0494117647059 0.046263068375 107% => OK
Pronouns: 0.103529411765 0.0685040099705 151% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.105882352941 0.118717715034 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0282352941176 0.0351676179071 80% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61093032628 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0658823529412 0.0309702414327 213% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0988235294118 0.0887237588012 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0188235294118 0.0209618222197 90% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0305882352941 0.0139019557991 220% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2110.0 2387.08602151 88% => OK
No of words: 388.0 408.028673835 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4381443299 5.86048508987 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.262886597938 0.338922669872 78% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.198453608247 0.251872472559 79% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.121134020619 0.174417080927 69% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.090206185567 0.112833075102 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61093032628 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533505154639 0.524397521467 102% => OK
Word variations: 59.4870686801 59.2087087015 100% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.5555555556 20.5533526081 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.080825966 48.84282405 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.222222222 120.699889404 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 20.5533526081 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.611111111111 0.644075263715 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 41.4009163803 45.7405998639 91% => OK
Elegance: 0.949275362319 1.45489161554 65% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344704049 0.300154397459 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.118361318714 0.103427244359 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0885606118741 0.0752933317313 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.525674437306 0.497263757937 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.159664042287 0.151897553556 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153898086245 0.114077575197 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.164230610442 0.0781384742642 210% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.36975682563 0.336927656856 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.10650079566 0.067059652881 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274673320674 0.210909579961 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1887039722 0.0618886996521 305% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 13.6433691756 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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