are the parents best teachers?
Our whole life consists of infinite wise statements. One of them is ‘PARENTS ARE THE BEST TEACHERS’. I totally agree with this statement for several main factors that I will try to examine below.
First of all, our parents taught us how to speak, how to walk, how to run. They taught us how to distinguish the bad from the good. Now how can you say that they are not our best teachers? If now you have a personality, believe me, it is not from your born, it is your observation from your parents. Most of the time, we see our parents like a figure that we do exactly what they do. We pursue them step by step. For instance, always I have a hero in my dreams that I want to be like her. She is my mom. When we are diseased, she never goes somewhere. She always ready to do what we want. It doesn’t matter, she is always there to help us. Now she has a good job and she is the queen of our house. For this reasons, one of my dreams is to have a good job and always there for help to my family such as her.
Secondly, they try to show us a better way which ends in our future. First they teach us how to love. Love towards each other, towards life, towards nature. Life is nothing without love. Then they teach us how to respect to olds, how to protect smalls, how to care people around us. They teach us basic rules of life. Now how can you say that parents are not professional teachers? Professional teachers learn from their parents. In this life, there are only 2 people who really wants, who really wish for. They are your parents, your dad, and your mom.
Sometimes in your opinion parents don’t understand you and they want to keep you away from your friends because they ask you to study, or they don’t allow you phone and computer because they want you to study. You think that they are incorrect yes? Believe me, you are incorrect because they want to keep you away from a daily or hourly joy and they want to endow you a joy that will never end until your life end. If you study proper, you will be able to have your own money and live freely how you want.
Taking this factors that I have just examined, we can draw a conclusion that parents are best the teachers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, in fact, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 98.0 43.0788530466 227% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23990498812 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23305451377 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44893111639 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 544.5 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 6.0 0.994623655914 603% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0382172585 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.5806451613 100.406767564 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.5806451613 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.93548387097 5.45110844103 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130342224623 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421100141184 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840145276104 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106385914929 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623501421296 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 11.7677419355 45% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 58.1214874552 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.1575268817 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.72 10.9000537634 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.16 8.01818996416 77% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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