Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is no doubt that changing the world play the prominent role in people's lives' quality. No one can blind eye to this factors impact on the happiness of the people. A debating question is raised related to the issue is that how much does quick changing of the world affect the people's lives. Some people may hold this viewpoint that people are now less happy or less satisfied owing to changing the world quickly. However, others look this concept from different lens and believe that convertion of the world make people's lives more pleased. In my perspective, the first beilif is true. From what follows, I will pinpoint some of outstanding reasons.
One of the most predominant reason coming mind related to the issue is that changing the world is beside of adding responsibility. When one science is developed, it brings more responsibility for some peoples and therefore, this makes more stress. Take the petroleum engineer as an example. Several years ago, there were a little tools and rigs to oil production and the petrolum engineers had less works to do. But, recently, after adventing some new technologhies in order to oil production and enhancement of oil recovery, the petroleum engineer's works have been increased. Additionally, their responsibility, stress and work pressure have been scalated Owing to they have more responsibility in front of their work and their governments.
The other equally important reason supported my idea is that people feel they should work more and more if thhey want to have a convinient life. In comparition with past days, todays people are more busy and depressed during the fact that they realy incline that their children and their families have the hospitable life. From psychological stand point, when people want to achieve more money, they tend to work hard and workin from early morning to late at night, gradually, make them tierd and depressed. This means that changing the world quickly is not so good for people's lives.
The last but not the leat is that some adverse events and situations have been come with changing world. For examole, raising the number of cars, especially private cars, has brought abough more car accidents, recently. In the past there were less cars and although traveling was difficult to people, there were less dead people by car accidents, too. An empirical test is conducted in west Asia obviously demonstrates that the 350 percent (4.5 folds) in people whom dye by car accident has been increased in 50 recent years. This clarifies that people's lives have been included more adverse events compare with the past.
From what has been mentioned above, we can safely reach the conclusion that people's lives have been less hapier by changing the world quickly. It is hard to disquise the fact that changing the world and invention of some technologies may have the possitive effects on people's lives such as performing works with more accuracy. Despite of this fact, people has been more depressed with more pressure and estress by changing the world. All in all, it is anticipated that people will be more estressful under the work's pressure by this rapid change of the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 232, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...raised related to the issue is that how much does quick changing of the world affect...
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Line 2, column 394, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun works is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...oduction and the petrolum engineers had less works to do. But, recently, after adven...
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Line 4, column 244, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun cars is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...dents, recently. In the past there were less cars and although traveling was difficu...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'no doubt', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.232358003442 0.229887763892 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.18760757315 0.158761421928 118% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0981067125645 0.0866891130778 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0533562822719 0.046263068375 115% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0292598967298 0.0685040099705 43% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117039586919 0.118717715034 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0619621342513 0.0351676179071 176% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.56401765658 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0240963855422 0.0309702414327 78% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0981067125645 0.0887237588012 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0120481927711 0.0209618222197 57% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0120481927711 0.0139019557991 87% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3167.0 2387.08602151 133% => OK
No of words: 530.0 408.028673835 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.97547169811 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79809637944 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.322641509434 0.338922669872 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.239622641509 0.251872472559 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.177358490566 0.174417080927 102% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.115094339623 0.112833075102 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56401765658 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494339622642 0.524397521467 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 58.9320075332 59.2087087015 100% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.3846153846 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3367535203 48.84282405 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.807692308 120.699889404 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.384615384615 0.644075263715 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 44.3468795356 45.7405998639 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.52229299363 1.45489161554 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.427126927369 0.300154397459 142% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.11877450311 0.103427244359 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0862090576187 0.0752933317313 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.498952989104 0.497263757937 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.128226026607 0.151897553556 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159532374676 0.114077575197 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879958251352 0.0781384742642 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.385320781193 0.336927656856 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0499959428228 0.067059652881 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296276171993 0.210909579961 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554040063071 0.0618886996521 90% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.86379928315 362% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 13.0 2.4623655914 528% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.6433691756 161% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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