Being self-employed or working for an employer
Some people are inclined toward working for someone else whereas others prefer self-employment. Personally speaking, I believe that being self-employed is much better since one would earn more money and would experience less stress by owing his or her own business.
Firstly, one of the greatest achievements of self-employment is that people would earn more money. Admittedly, being the only investor, self-employed person could receive the whole financial returns to the business. Not only this, a self-employed person is free to choose and employ certain marketing strategies that he or she finds practical to enhance profit improvement. For example, when I founded my own business on importing food additives, I could increase my income by twice compared with that much I earned when I worked as an employee in a private company. Moreover, my boss was a conservative person who would not like take risks to employ different marketing strategies. However, working on my own business, I had the freedom to prepare certain polls to figure out my customers’ interests so that I focused on those special products, which better meet the customer’s needs. Therefore, a self-employed person would definitely gain more money and even would improve it using his or her own business policies.
Secondly, it is quite likely for a self-employed person to have less stress in work environment. In fact, it is not necessary for a self-employed person to be worry of how his or her work is judged by the boss. One also does not have to wonder if his mistakes would negatively affect the employer’s opinion about him or how his success in a project guarantees his promotion. Moreover, the self-employed individuals know that there are no worries of surpassing other employees to be the “star employee”. For example, when I worked in a dairy company I always had to be worried if I did a good job and I was under a lot of pressure in order not to make any mistakes that hurt the factory. However, now by establishing my own business, I could get rid of all these intruding concerns.
Overall, taking into account all these factors, I prefer to be self-employed. There are, indeed, many advantages to self-employment, such as earning more money and having less stress. So why not establish our own business when it is more advantageous?
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 636, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'risks employing'.
Suggestion: risks employing
...ervative person who would not like take risks to employ different marketing strategies. However...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'whereas', 'for example', 'in fact', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.188340807175 0.229887763892 82% => OK
Verbs: 0.165919282511 0.158761421928 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.103139013453 0.0866891130778 119% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0695067264574 0.046263068375 150% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0807174887892 0.0685040099705 118% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0896860986547 0.118717715034 76% => OK
Participles: 0.0403587443946 0.0351676179071 115% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.20250393587 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0313901345291 0.0309702414327 101% => OK
Particles: 0.00224215246637 0.00188951952338 119% => OK
Determiners: 0.067264573991 0.0887237588012 76% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0224215246637 0.0209618222197 107% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0224215246637 0.0139019557991 161% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2357.0 2387.08602151 99% => OK
No of words: 388.0 408.028673835 95% => OK
Chars per words: 6.07474226804 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.360824742268 0.338922669872 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.273195876289 0.251872472559 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.203608247423 0.174417080927 117% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.15206185567 0.112833075102 135% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20250393587 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546391752577 0.524397521467 104% => OK
Word variations: 61.7221839292 59.2087087015 104% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.5555555556 20.5533526081 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.516419473 48.84282405 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.944444444 120.699889404 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 20.5533526081 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.777777777778 0.644075263715 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 48.8751431844 45.7405998639 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.00709219858 1.45489161554 69% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238217081745 0.300154397459 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.112844820316 0.103427244359 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0944953339253 0.0752933317313 126% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.460199111501 0.497263757937 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.114890805788 0.151897553556 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830880792004 0.114077575197 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584282262122 0.0781384742642 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.3142313062 0.336927656856 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0925904120592 0.067059652881 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163813435847 0.210909579961 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056470243577 0.0618886996521 91% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.