Businesses should hire employees for their entire lives. Do you agree or disagree?
Upon the question should businesses hire employees for their entire lives, different people have different opinions based on their educations and cultures. From my point of view, recruiting new employees has some advantages and disadvantages but I think its benefits outweigh its drawbacks. In the following paragraphs, I will try to explain my position more clearly.
First and foremost, in my opinion, if staff know that they can work in a company until their retirement time, they will lose their motivation and they will not work hard. For example, in my country, government hire workers for their entire lives so that they are less motivated to work or create new solutions for challenge. They usually want to work whenever they want and they will retire after thirty years.
Secondly, a business or company can benefit from the knowledge and energy of new employees. Since they have recently graduated from the university, they have new ideas and plans. Besides, they have more motivation and can work better. New staff usually want to work from early in the morning to late in the night. They are eager to get more information about the new environment, make new friends and cooperate with other colleagues.
Finally, it is important to bear in mind that hiring new staff has some disadvantages for employers because they have to spend a huge amount of money on training and educating newcomers. In addition, new employees make more mistakes and they have concerned about losing their jobs. In contrast, if businesses hire their employees for their entire lives, they will feel relax and can concentrate on their projects easily and in a more convenient way.
Taking all the aforementioned arguments into account, it can be concluded that hiring new employees has some benefits and drawbacks for bosses but I think its advantages outweigh the disadvantages based on the reasons which I outlined above.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in addition, in contrast, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11146496815 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71325804894 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506369426752 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222219227043 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886120865687 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122197121607 0.0737576698707 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15009359048 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.099384589519 0.0645574589148 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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