The college years are the best time in a person life. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons to support your opinion.
Some of people think that the college years are best time in their life but others not. Their thouhgts related with their experiment at college years. I think college years are best and I will explain two importanat arguments why college years are best time in a personal's life.
Firstly, If you go to college this mean you don't have to any other thing to need to do. Generally this situation is this way. You don't have responsibility to support your family as financial events so you don't have to earn money. For example, I am a student and my family meet my requirement. My single responsiblity is to learn my course to help me in business environment. And also I must graduate with good degree but this responsiblities are so easy compare with earning money for yourself and your family. That's why being a student and college yaers are the best time.
Seconly the fact that, you can meet new people in college time. You have numerous way to do this such as joining a student club and going different place with your friends. But this situation isn't easy in business environment. You are in your office most of your time. You have single option to meet people. This option is business travel but it's not enough so college are best place to meet new people and hang out with them. And also if you want to new environment to spend time this will be easy because you will have so much friends and any of them will have different friends. That's why college years are the best time in a person's life.
To sum up, If you aren't ready to so much responsiblity and you want to spend your time with your friend, college are the best for you. I think the reason are that some people don't think this way because they didn't best time in their college.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, for example, i think, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 321.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45794392523 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33081355778 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433021806854 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5607797944 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.55 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.05 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414833312845 0.236089414692 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143420925178 0.076458572812 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912678132441 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281015787802 0.150856017488 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344259361997 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.05 8.01818996416 75% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 86.8835125448 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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