A company is going to give some money either to support the arts or to protect the environment. Which do you think the company should choose? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A company with it’s fund can make a lot of changes to our lives. Some people think that it should use the money for maintaining art. On the other hand, others think that it would be a better idea for a company to use its money to help the environment. I am of the opinion that a company ought to spend it’s money on the protection of the environment. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, the environment has been in jeopardy for a considerable amount of time and it needs serious help. There are many non-profit organizations throughout the world that support the survival of the environment. Unfortunately, their help is not enough to make a significant difference to the reality. The environment is in vain for greater help, which can only come from those big companies with a huge budget and detailed plans. For example, there’s a big paper company in my city that tries their best to help the environment. They have officially promised that for every tree they cut down to produce the paper, they will plant two trees to compensate for the loss of the trees. In fact, they keep their words, the forest, in which they cut down trees, has flourished because of the company’s project.
Furthermore, by helping the environment, the company will benefit itself. The fate of the environment has long been very controversial. People pay a lot of attention to it. The disasters that happened to the environment such as deforestation, storm have always been the headlines of all newspapers. By saving the environment, which everyone cares about, the company will greatly improve its reputation. As I mentioned above, the project of the paper company in my city has helped to enhance the image of the company to the public. Paper companies are often criticized because they make profit from natural resources. By planting trees to replace the old ones, the company has never been under the public’s scrutiny. Moreover, they also raised a lot of campaigns to raise the people in the city’s awareness for the sake of the environment. This makes them earn many awards and therefore make it more well-known.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that a company should use its money to save the environment. This is because a company can make a great difference to the environment and that company would be able to improve it’s image to the public’s eyes.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'furthermore', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'for example', 'i feel', 'in conclusion', 'in fact', 'such as', 'to begin with', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.234273318872 0.229887763892 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.147505422993 0.158761421928 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.060737527115 0.0866891130778 70% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0390455531453 0.046263068375 84% => OK
Pronouns: 0.060737527115 0.0685040099705 89% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123644251627 0.118717715034 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0260303687636 0.0351676179071 74% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.80957333137 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0433839479393 0.0309702414327 140% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.140997830803 0.0887237588012 159% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0260303687636 0.0209618222197 124% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0130151843818 0.0139019557991 94% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2456.0 2387.08602151 103% => OK
No of words: 417.0 408.028673835 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.8896882494 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.304556354916 0.338922669872 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.237410071942 0.251872472559 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.153477218225 0.174417080927 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.122302158273 0.112833075102 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80957333137 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479616306954 0.524397521467 91% => OK
Word variations: 52.4956191087 59.2087087015 89% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 17.375 20.5533526081 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5652275017 48.84282405 58% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.333333333 120.699889404 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.5533526081 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.583333333333 0.644075263715 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.54480286738 144% => OK
Readability: 41.1160071942 45.7405998639 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.55263157895 1.45489161554 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.485825138928 0.300154397459 162% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.109445397081 0.103427244359 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.100948293329 0.0752933317313 134% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.533255896273 0.497263757937 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.191585662922 0.151897553556 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.20761351569 0.114077575197 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100906561313 0.0781384742642 129% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.534999143702 0.336927656856 159% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0694009168497 0.067059652881 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.397900278502 0.210909579961 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398857832935 0.0618886996521 64% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
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Rates: 76 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23 Out of 30