A company is going to give some money either to support the arts or to protect the environment. Which do you think the company should choose? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, the polluting environment is a big concern with the government and all of the people in the earth. If a company is going to give some money either to support the arts or to protect the environment, some people think that the company should support the art. But others do not think so. However, I strongly think that the company should use that money to protect the environment in order to prevent health problems, protect the future of our children and maintain the ecosystem.
Firstly, protect the environment is preferable because it prevents health problems. If the environment becomes more and more contaminated, we will have to live with the dusty air and the polluted water or polluted rivers. Therefore, we will be able to get many dangerous diseases, especially are cancer or some diseases about lung. In addition, it can be a cause of many viruses, which can make our life become shorter than before.
Secondly, protect the environment is better because of the future of our children. The environment is more and more polluted day by day, our children or many next generations will become more and unhealthier and will not have the good place to live.
Finally, I think that the company should provide that money to protect the environment is the right choice because it will maintain the ecosystem. There are many animals living on the earth, so if the environment is polluted, many animal species will not have a place to live. As a result, plenty of animal species will be dying or will be listed in the red book.
In conclusion, I think the company should give that money to protect the environment is the correct one. I believe that because it prevents health problems protect the future of our next generations and maintain the ecosystem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...s a big concern with the government and all of the people in the earth. If a company is go...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.217910447761 0.229887763892 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.170149253731 0.158761421928 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0746268656716 0.0866891130778 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0477611940299 0.046263068375 103% => OK
Pronouns: 0.044776119403 0.0685040099705 65% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0925373134328 0.118717715034 78% => OK
Participles: 0.0179104477612 0.0351676179071 51% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65316156743 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0328358208955 0.0309702414327 106% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.131343283582 0.0887237588012 148% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0417910447761 0.0209618222197 199% => Try to use less modal verbs (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.00298507462687 0.0139019557991 21% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1767.0 2387.08602151 74% => OK
No of words: 303.0 408.028673835 74% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83168316832 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48200974243 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.353135313531 0.338922669872 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.267326732673 0.251872472559 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.161716171617 0.174417080927 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.105610561056 0.112833075102 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65316156743 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 212.727598566 61% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.42904290429 0.524397521467 82% => OK
Word variations: 41.3716127138 59.2087087015 70% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6684587814 73% => OK
Sentence length: 20.2 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1354343559 48.84282405 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.8 120.699889404 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.933333333333 0.644075263715 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 46.9326732673 45.7405998639 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.25 1.45489161554 86% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.533262681465 0.300154397459 178% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.126213982516 0.103427244359 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0632109965426 0.0752933317313 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.598731452452 0.497263757937 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.19534876858 0.151897553556 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.240731767385 0.114077575197 211% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.186748058861 0.0781384742642 239% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.419425495066 0.336927656856 124% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0516328832027 0.067059652881 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.370661811955 0.210909579961 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143245970625 0.0618886996521 231% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 8.42114695341 47% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 13.6433691756 66% => OK
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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