Compare and contrast the way of your life with that of your parents. Which way of life do you think would be more satisfying for the next generations?
Parents are the first and most important teachers of an infant. They always take care of their child for his/her betterment of future. They nurture the child in most suitable way. As the time passes, the child gets more exposure of the world and starts involving into more real situation. If we look into present world, there will be lot of differences in our time and parents' time.
We are involved more into digital world and doesn't care much about the neighborhood. Our parents had better connection with the people around, eventually, they can be called more socially active in reality. The next generation should care about their vicinity more than their digital life. When living in a metro city, we don't have time to interact people face to face, rather connected through internet. We have become neckdown generation, which has its own negative impacts. In contrast to it, parents had better talkative life which resulted them a healthy and happy life. The next generation should understand both the ways of life and better choose the parent's life.
We share a relation of friendship that doesn't share blood but more stronger than it. Parents have limited friends and less number of acquaintances than us, but share more stronger bond than us. We have over thousand friends over multiple social sites, but hardly close to 1% to them. The future people can find the differences of this situation more when they will face it, advisable if the first one chosen over latter one.
In conclusion of viewpoint, the parents have lead to better life which helped them to grow more happily in both conditions, mentally and physically. The modern lifestyle is rather convoluted and difficult to live and have more hazardous and detrimental effects on a person. The next generations are suggested here to grow more in traditional way compare to modern style and take the positives from our parents life style. They should sound digitally active and paddle UP with the new technologies to cop up new changes and challenges, but to satiate and enjoy the meaning of life, they should choose parents lifestyle.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 69, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'stronger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stronger
...dship that doesn't share blood but more stronger than it. Parents have limited friends a...
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Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'stronger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stronger
...ber of acquaintances than us, but share more stronger bond than us. We have over thousand fri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, in conclusion, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03098591549 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61361396931 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535211267606 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0418492447 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2129268189 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700614810798 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737299594545 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129711027589 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801153807569 0.0645574589148 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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