Compare and contrast your way of life with your parents.Which way of life do you think would be more satisfying for future generations.T

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...elopment results in terms of technology.When i was young,my parents did not have muc...
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...d to wash her clothes on her own.But now,i have washing machine and even a drier.S...
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...i have washing machine and even a drier.So for me it is just matter of hours.I do ...
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...er.So for me it is just matter of hours.I do not need to wake up early to wash my...
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...w our livings get changed. The second ,the communication technology also become...
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...cation technology also become so easier.Now a days,if i want to talk my families or...
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...cation technology also become so easier.Now a days,if i want to talk my families or friend...
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...on technology also become so easier.Now a days,if i want to talk my families or friend...
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...hnology also become so easier.Now a days,if i want to talk my families or friends,t...
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...ogy also become so easier.Now a days,if i want to talk my families or friends,tha...
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...if i want to talk my families or friends,than i can easily make it by mobile phone.In...
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...ant to talk my families or friends,than i can easily make it by mobile phone.In o...
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...an i can easily make it by mobile phone.In older days,my parents did not posses ev...
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...ly make it by mobile phone.In older days,my parents did not posses even phone.So th...
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...days this whole procedure took long time,sometimes it took more than week.How difficult fo...
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...o send some news early but they can not.So my way to live life is more faster than...
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... they can not.So my way to live life is more faster than my parents'. The last poin...
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...than my parents'. The last point,the way you can entertainment yourself are ...
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...rtainment yourself are also so improved.In old days,people saw dramas on stage onc...
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...ourself are also so improved.In old days,people saw dramas on stage once a week.Now you...
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...,people saw dramas on stage once a week.Now you can see that by staying at home in ...
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...at home in your own way and at any time.At those days,you had to be present at per...
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...ur own way and at any time.At those days,you had to be present at perticular time if...
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...r time if you want to see drama or dance,however now a days you have television at home ...
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... home and also it supports all channels.So you can watch any channel which you lik...
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...nel which you like and also at any time.You can also go to theators at any time.Tha...
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...y which you can spend you laiesure time.Like playing and watching games at stadium,g...
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...ke playing and watching games at stadium,go to museum,shopping malls,etc.So in this...
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...d watching games at stadium,go to museum,shopping malls,etc.So in this way you can enjoy ...
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... than before. The final and big point,now i am living in world of internet.The in...
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...nt,now i am living in world of internet.The internet is very helpful in all aspect ...
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...t is very helpful in all aspect of life.Internet has made our living simple and easy.Thr...
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...net has made our living simple and easy.Through internet i can know the news of every t...
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...ernet i can know the news of every time.I can watch it live and the news will rea...
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...w the news of every time.I can watch it live and the news will reach to me in just s...
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...e news will reach to me in just seconds.So because of this i do not need to spend ...
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...e news will reach to me in just seconds.So because of this i do not need to spend time in ...
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...o me in just seconds.So because of this i do not need to spend time in reading ne...
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... i do not need to spend time in reading news paper.This is so hactic sometimes,as i am wor...
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...g news paper.This is so hactic sometimes,as i am working women,i do not get enough ...
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...ws paper.This is so hactic sometimes,as i am working women,i do not get enough ti...
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...o hactic sometimes,as i am working women,i do not get enough time.The another thin...
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... working women,i do not get enough time.The another thing is now i can do shopping ...
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...et enough time.The another thing is now i can do shopping online with different v...
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...different varieties and chippest manner.Unlike,my parents,they had limited choices,so ...
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...of time to go and check different shops.So i feel more confort in my way of life. ...
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...time to go and check different shops.So i feel more confort in my way of life. ...
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...fort in my way of life. In conclusion,my child will surely take advantage of tec...
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...able and more convenient than my living.But i am sure that my living is best than m...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'while', 'another thing', 'i feel', 'in conclusion', 'kind of', 'in my opinion']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.236933797909 0.229887763892 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.174216027875 0.158761421928 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0783972125436 0.0866891130778 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0853658536585 0.046263068375 185% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.088850174216 0.0685040099705 130% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.116724738676 0.118717715034 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0261324041812 0.0351676179071 74% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.08016985389 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0278745644599 0.0309702414327 90% => OK
Particles: 0.00348432055749 0.00188951952338 184% => OK
Determiners: 0.0540069686411 0.0887237588012 61% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0261324041812 0.0209618222197 125% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00696864111498 0.0139019557991 50% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2932.0 2387.08602151 123% => OK
No of words: 505.0 408.028673835 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80594059406 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74048574033 4.48200974243 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.29504950495 0.338922669872 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.239603960396 0.251872472559 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.170297029703 0.174417080927 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.118811881188 0.112833075102 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08016985389 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524752475248 0.524397521467 100% => OK
Word variations: 63.1470887487 59.2087087015 107% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6684587814 29% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 84.1666666667 20.5533526081 410% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 172.736472376 48.84282405 354% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 488.666666667 120.699889404 405% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 84.1666666667 20.5533526081 410% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 0.644075263715 336% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 85.0 5.54480286738 1533% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 108.127062706 45.7405998639 236% => OK
Elegance: 1.09 1.45489161554 75% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231448890613 0.300154397459 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.211764572959 0.103427244359 205% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0272416412476 0.0752933317313 36% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.497263757937 201% => Sentence paragraph similarity is high.
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 3.04047097224e-16 0.151897553556 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138850608705 0.114077575197 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585888519904 0.0781384742642 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.245406416703 0.336927656856 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0284095102551 0.067059652881 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138850608705 0.210909579961 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585888519904 0.0618886996521 95% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8870967742 50% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 13.6433691756 44% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.