Do you agree of disagree with following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable when it was when your grandparents were children.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Life is developing quickly and unpredictable. There are a lot of changes nowadays comparing to some decades ago. It is easy to see the difference about both business and culture between period which we live and our grandparents lived. It is argued that life today is more easier and more comfortable than what our grandparents had undergone. In my opinion, I agree with this idea. Modern life with a lot of advantages help people must not hard like in the past.
In current decades, people have invented a lot of things which help life is easier and more comfortable. First, I want to talk about mean of transports. While our grandparents just had bike or sometimes motorbike to move, people nowadays have varieties of transports to use. Plane is a great invention of human. It helps people can go a long distance in just a short time. It is significant advantage which my grandparents were not received. Besides that, people do housework is easier now when they have supporting of many facilities. While our grandparents must wash clothes by hand, we have washing machine to solve all our clothes in few minutes. What is more, the best invention of these decades, the appearing of Internet make people's life is very exciting and more comfortable. People just need using computer to do many work which must be done hard before. In general, life today has more benefits for human than past.
Additionally, studying is also easier now. In the past, our grandparents did not have many source to studying. The only material which our grandparents had is text book at school. In contrast, people have many kind of source to learn today such as reference books or online book that is downloaded from Internet. More importantly, modern life develops more, the kind of jobs are more diversity. People today have more opportunities to choose jobs what they enjoy, those jobs even did not have in time our grandparents lived. So, it is true when said that life of us is more beautiful than our grandparents.
Some people can say that life today has more pressures and stress than in the past. People must undergo a lot of difficulties and even be crazy because of many stress. However, in my opinion, I believe those issues will make life more exciting. Difficulty make people stronger and have more experience. It is a fact that people nowadays more confident than in the past.
In conclusion, I believe that those points which I make for supporting the obviously view that life today is really more comfortable and easier for people. Our grandparents did not have good conditions like us, but they have had a lot of succeed and desirable achievement. People today have many advantages like that, there is no reason why we cannot do as well as our grandparents have done.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 268, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
... lived. It is argued that life today is more easier and more comfortable than what our gran...
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Line 2, column 823, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun work seems to be countable; consider using: 'many works'.
Suggestion: many works
.... People just need using computer to do many work which must be done hard before. In gene...
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Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun source seems to be countable; consider using: 'many sources'.
Suggestion: many sources
...the past, our grandparents did not have many source to studying. The only material which ou...
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Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
...ook at school. In contrast, people have many kind of source to learn today such as refere...
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Line 4, column 155, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun stress seems to be countable; consider using: 'many stresses'.
Suggestion: many stresses
...fficulties and even be crazy because of many stress. However, in my opinion, I believe thos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, really, so, well, while, in conclusion, in contrast, in general, kind of, such as, as well as, in my opinion, it is true, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2290.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 477.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80083857442 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72220426078 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454926624738 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 734.4 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1535856433 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.5625 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.90625 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8709677419 194% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19985180726 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610779758738 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511577349473 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133969010815 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301552990499 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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