Do you agree or this agree with the following statement ? Television advertising directed toward young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed. Use specific reasons and example to support your answer.
Television advertising has become a powerful method for companies to attract more people to buy their products. However, this also has many drawbacks as well since many companies allow for advertisements to be directed toward young children. Thus, I am of the opinion that television advertising for young children should not be allowed. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First and foremost, most children don't watch advertisements on TV. They often have the notion the advertisements are boring and often skip the advertisements on television. In addition, many parents don't allow their children to watch TV so frequently at such young ages. As a result, television advertising designed for young children is not effect as expected. So it would be a waste of money for a company to design an advertisement on television targeted to young children. My personal experience is a good example to illustrate this. Ever since I was a little kid, I have always held hostility toward advertisements on TV. I found them very meaningless and importantly, they usually interfered with my favorite cartoons. Every time I came across an advertisement on TV, I chose to turn off the TV to play with my toys or to change the channel.
Moreover, children at the age from two to five are too naive to realize most advertisements on television are deceitful. Young children tend to believe everything they saw on TV and totally fall into the false claims of the product in the advertisements. When they utterly take to the products advertised on TV, they will do everything to ask and convince their parents to purchase that product for them, even if the product is expensive. Consequently, if the parents turned down their children offer, many kids will misbehave and argue with their parents until they get what they want. For example, unlike me, my little brother is quite impressionable. Whenever he sees a toy advertisement on TV, he asks our parents to buy it for him. Some toys that we purchased are badly manufactured, they are often broke after just a few weeks. For that reason, my parents became quite strict and didn't buy toys from the advertisements for my brother. Unexpectedly, he started yelling at my parents until they decided to buy the toy for him.
Owing to all the reasons mentioned above, I strongly believe that we should not allow television advertising directed toward young children. This is because most children don't like to watch advertisements on TV and children are too naive and innocent to know that advertisements are often deceitful.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'consequently', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'for example', 'i feel', 'in addition', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.211618257261 0.229887763892 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.172199170124 0.158761421928 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0705394190871 0.0866891130778 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0705394190871 0.046263068375 152% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0892116182573 0.0685040099705 130% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122406639004 0.118717715034 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0269709543568 0.0351676179071 77% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.02426965993 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0435684647303 0.0309702414327 141% => OK
Particles: 0.00414937759336 0.00188951952338 220% => OK
Determiners: 0.0726141078838 0.0887237588012 82% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0124481327801 0.0209618222197 59% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00829875518672 0.0139019557991 60% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2677.0 2387.08602151 112% => OK
No of words: 437.0 408.028673835 107% => OK
Chars per words: 6.12585812357 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.320366132723 0.338922669872 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.260869565217 0.251872472559 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.194508009153 0.174417080927 112% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.130434782609 0.112833075102 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02426965993 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487414187643 0.524397521467 93% => OK
Word variations: 54.4215560273 59.2087087015 92% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 18.2083333333 20.5533526081 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0900269562 48.84282405 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.541666667 120.699889404 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2083333333 20.5533526081 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.541666666667 0.644075263715 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.54480286738 162% => OK
Readability: 44.2952898551 45.7405998639 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.0875 1.45489161554 75% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318590460106 0.300154397459 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0908958092191 0.103427244359 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0873994575113 0.0752933317313 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.429683442776 0.497263757937 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.137002684487 0.151897553556 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113166410438 0.114077575197 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704167152116 0.0781384742642 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.383655623809 0.336927656856 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0825670784091 0.067059652881 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249586640069 0.210909579961 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484237776286 0.0618886996521 78% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.86379928315 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.4623655914 284% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.75985663082 254% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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