DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE ABOUT PEOPLE ARE SPENDING THERE TIME NOWADAYS DOING WHAT THEY LIKE AND NOT DOING WHAT THEY SHOULD DO?
responsibility is always a mandatory to be fulfilled to make a society in order and prosperous. different people have different responsibility whether they are in public administrator or family part. however, many are reluctant to dodge their responsibility now often as they rank mainly for the personal enjoyment.
To begin with, in today's world, a people tendency to stick with enjoyment especially in developing country by neglecting their responsibility. Lack of proper system to make act them in discipline is missing trend there. whole system is rife with corruption. Mentality of doing what they like and shrugging from the public responsibility is commonly seen. I want to put my own experinence to shed light on this issue. Once I had to register my personal information in communication office, I was unable to file up in mean time; the reasons behind is very simple to us: no strict rule. The officer arrived an hour late but there were no body to ask him a question about his irresponsibility. As a result, I had to suffer for my task.
Secondly, even from an individual fails today to act their duty honestly and exclusively. In fact, people are more advanced, they are unwilling to do any duty if it is painstaking. even they sought to do that, plenty of error can be scrutinized with a cursory look. Probably, no one do their duty with passion. simple example to relate this context is that my most of the teacher do not want to fulfil their job effectively. Their main religion is to teach a students with their best and flourish the knowledge. however, this dedication hardly can be seen in teacher's execution. Similarly, students are also elude from their task and manage to cheat what they ease them in study. Back in my high school, my most of the friends cheated a several time despite they knew that it was immoral. Thus, people are now more acquainted with pleasure and barely give consideration to the responsibility.
To sum up, contemplating all aforementioned reasons, one can realize that how people are making distance with their responsiblity and do whatever they want.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, honestly, however, if, look, second, secondly, similarly, so, thus, in fact, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 356.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97752808989 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0334945826 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589887640449 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7602106977 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5454545455 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1818181818 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68181818182 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248607284735 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710862474293 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894798862642 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149403733736 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572470249772 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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