Do you agree or disagree with the following statement All jobs should provide some opportunity for physical exercise Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All jobs should provide some opportunity for physical exercise. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Many people believe that workplaces should offer opportunities for physical exercise to their employees, and I am among those who strongly support this statement. For the past couple of years, there has been an increased emphasis on employee health and well-being, therefore it is expected that all companies provide appropriate facilities to their staff.

To begin with, most jobs nowadays are sedentary, which means that employees have to sit and work hours upon hours. This has a negative impact on health, such as causing fatigue and pain as well as weight gain and its associated problems in the long term. Employee health should be of utmost importance and if steps are not taken to ensure their health, companies can face problems such as complaints, strikes, high turnover rate, and in dire cases, legal action. Therefore, it is necessary for workers to be able to move about to reduce the chances of such issues.

Furthermore, there is scientific proof that people need to move around after an hour or so of working to increase flow of oxygen to the brain. This helps improve attention span, gives them a break from work and keeps them motivated. A better work environment would mean better performance by employees. Google is the epitome of a company striving to ensure their employees well-being. They have offices with large spaces for movement as well as gyms, exercise classes and swimming pools. This, amongst other reasons, is why people dream of working at Google

In short, companies should aim to provide means of physical exercise for their employees. This could include gyms, areas to move freely, swimming pools or yoga classes. Whatever the method, the health of their employees should be the first priority of all companies. Not only are organizations legally required to guarantee their staff’s well-being, but by providing breaks for physical exercise can improve company performance as well as an individual’s job satisfaction.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, as to, in short, such as, as well as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20125786164 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71540834981 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59748427673 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0156495119 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.266666667 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155229276066 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052613780639 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058568809932 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110120741478 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694775452697 0.0645574589148 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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