Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People who have been through education have learned history. Although many debates about the necessity of learning history, I believe learning history is essential to what people think and behave for following reasons.
First of all, learning history greatly make people be aware of their national identity and be patriotic. Some may argue that why national identity and be patriotic is important. Especially in the era of globalization, people are generally open-minded and consider to find a livable country is more important than national identity, a lot of immigrants in some country is an exemplary. However, one do have to pay taxes in every country around the world and some country even have conscription policy. The paucity of patriotism and national conscious would only result in more conscription and tax evasion.
Besides, many things happened in our daily life are related to history. Take banknotes and coins as an example, someone is printed on the banknotes in many kind of banknotes issued by almost every country and the someone means one of the greatest people in their country. However, if history is not a required subject to learn anymore, young generation would not even noticed that national father is just in their wallet. And hence, lose the meaning of memorization of the great contribution by those great man. In addition, national day and other meaningful holiday would also become a meaningless holiday if the story behind it is forgotten by young generation.
Moreover, the most valuable part of learning history is that people actually inspire from the successful story and warm from the aberrant behaviors did by someone before. For example, not only did world war 2 collapse most of the imperialism but also warmed people how scare it was to start a war. And one important point that world war 2 teach us was that the catastrophic nuclear bomb, at some point, did ameliorate the peace of the world because of its devastating characteristic. People should study these valuable lessons especially because they were composed of sweats and bloods of our ancestors.
In conclusion, not every student who is in history major; however, many reasons suggest that studying history help people behalf right. And the stories in history are often interesting. Therefore, I believe that all students should take history class.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
...nal identity and be patriotic. Some may argue that why national identity and be patri...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider finding'.
Suggestion: consider finding
...n, people are generally open-minded and consider to find a livable country is more important tha...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
... someone is printed on the banknotes in many kind of banknotes issued by almost every cou...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'someone'?
Suggestion: the; someone
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Message: The verb 'would' requires base form of the verb: 'notice'
Suggestion: notice
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1979.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 382.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18062827225 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72838799273 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53664921466 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 633.6 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7697252741 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.157894737 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1052631579 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21052631579 5.45110844103 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121892859895 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042881343936 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557846636673 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769214345644 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618391427873 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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