Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to improve the quality of education in a country is to increase teachers’ salaries.
In today’s convoluted and competitive world, it becomes a highly charged and widely raised topic whether increasing teachers’ salaries is the best way of enhancing the quality of education in a country or not. Therefore, some people are the leading proponents of the claim that people should be paid high salaries to improve the quality of education in different educational centers. However, some others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that there are some more significant and contributing factors which will have brilliant effect on the quality of education. From y vantage point the second belief is more persuasive. In what follows, I will pinpoint the most irrefutable reasons.
To commence, one of the compelling reasons lending credence to stance taken above is that teachers should be required to take part in training class to improve their information and experience. To elaborate on, staggering progress of information and technology is way of the world and no one can stop it. Hence, compassionate and successful teachers are those who improve their knowledge to be able to convey the latest information to their students. Therefore, by taking part in training classes they will be taught the most up-to –date knowledge. Then they can teach them in their classrooms. Besides they will become familiar with their colleagues and have a chance to exchange their experience and information and try to find a logical solution for a diverse array of problems which they encounter in the classrooms. Besides, in training classes they will become familiar with the latest psychological approaches. Hence, they will be taught how to create friendly atmosphere in the classrooms. That is, they learn who to build close and great friendship with students to be able to convince them to spend their priceless time on learning advanced and useful l knowledge. Consequently, not only will training classes enhance teachers’ information, but also it helps them to more easily encourage students to do their best and do not waste their time on unnecessary or time-consuming activities, which result in improving the quality of education in a country.
Another equally convincing point that justifies my assertion is that government should dedicate a large budget to provide highly qualified educational equipment. Going into depth, students should have convenient access to super-fast internet service and electronic publisher to read the latest article published by outstanding professors to resolve their problems they encounter in their study or improve their information. Besides, students need well-stock libraries which provide different rare and reference books for them, which can motivate students to spend their time on advanced and equipped libraries to be more knowledgeable scholars. Therefore, improving the quality and equipment and providing up-to-date facilities for students can enhance the quality of education of different countries.
To wrap it up, taking into account of all the factors that I illustrated above, it can be concluded that teachers should be needed to take part in training classes to enhance the quality of education in country. Besides students should have convenient access to highly qualified educational facilities to resolve their educational difficulties and promote their knowledge, which lead to improving the level of literacy of societies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, hence, however, if, may, second, so, then, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 84.0 52.1666666667 161% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.0752688172 297% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2891.0 1977.66487455 146% => OK
No of words: 526.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49619771863 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78901763229 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00041501753 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471482889734 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 897.3 618.680645161 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.205106172 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.666666667 100.406767564 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0476190476 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38095238095 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177133180867 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568112414178 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706789765176 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123091162371 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523403743416 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 11.7677419355 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 10.9000537634 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 86.8835125448 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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