Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Travelling, as a vacation, is an exciting activity that enables people to stay them away from their hectic life. There are two ways people organize tours: tour in a group led by a professional guide and individual solo travel. However, when it comes to the point whether an organized tour is best or the individual solo travel, people split in their opinion. In the instance, I am of my honest opinion that travel in a group led by a guide is the best way of travelling rather than travelling alone. The following reasons could explain why.
First of all, the key reason is that a professional guide provide tourists with authentic information on the sights. People usually like to acquire knowledge about history, culture, and heritage of the sights they visit. In the case, without a professional guide, it is almost impossible to gain the information accurately. Apart from that, travelling in a group led by guide allows tourists to explore the sights that they would not normally be aware of. Take my own experience as an example. I twice travelled to Japan. In my second tour in the country, I realize that I missed many attractive spots and accurate information.
Secondly, it reduces several hassles like price negotiation, planning the trip, and so on. That is to say, when people make a tour in a group led by guide, they do not need waste times for itinerary and do not have worry about negotiating with restaurant or taxi driver. For example, my friends made a tour without hiring a guide so as to save money. But in the end, they spent more money on travel guide map, restaurants, hotels, taxies, and so forth.
Last but not the least, with a guide, tourist can avoid cultural conflicts with locals. To put it another way, every country has different culture and custom and a culture or custom often is not acceptable to the people of different culture. So, when a tourist, without adequate knowledge of the host country’s culture, does such thing that does not square with the local culture, it then may lead to conflict. But, we can avert this bitter situation if we hire a guide as he is aware of the local customs.
In pithy, I believe that travel in a group with a guide is the best way to make a trip. A guide can take care of all things a tourist needs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[3]
Message: Did you mean 'to waste'?
Suggestion: to waste
... a group led by guide, they do not need waste times for itinerary and do not have wor...
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Line 5, column 331, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ends made a tour without hiring a guide so as to save money. But in the end, they spent ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'apart from', 'as to', 'for example', 'first of all', 'that is to say']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.238611713666 0.229887763892 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.134490238612 0.158761421928 85% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0802603036876 0.0866891130778 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.056399132321 0.046263068375 122% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0520607375271 0.0685040099705 76% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123644251627 0.118717715034 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0281995661605 0.0351676179071 80% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.58441411002 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0260303687636 0.0309702414327 84% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.108459869848 0.0887237588012 122% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0130151843818 0.0209618222197 62% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0130151843818 0.0139019557991 94% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2283.0 2387.08602151 96% => OK
No of words: 406.0 408.028673835 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62315270936 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.315270935961 0.338922669872 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.224137931034 0.251872472559 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.147783251232 0.174417080927 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0911330049261 0.112833075102 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58441411002 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524630541872 0.524397521467 100% => OK
Word variations: 58.8790512672 59.2087087015 99% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.4545454545 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2399905645 48.84282405 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.772727273 120.699889404 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.636363636364 0.644075263715 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 40.868338558 45.7405998639 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.60714285714 1.45489161554 110% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.478511885248 0.300154397459 159% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0798426071467 0.103427244359 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0747649354073 0.0752933317313 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.475449749449 0.497263757937 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.148789299815 0.151897553556 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16179096477 0.114077575197 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106046372699 0.0781384742642 136% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.305413179419 0.336927656856 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0801534561361 0.067059652881 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.318816366101 0.210909579961 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717419600778 0.0618886996521 116% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.