Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are many spectacular things around the world are worthy of attention. Traveling to different places gives us new insights and great experiences. For this purpose there are two ways and strategies to visit: first traveling on your own, and second traveling in a group with a tour leader. Personally speaking, I would believe that the advantages of traveling in a group outweigh traveling alone.
First and foremost, traveling along with a tour leader provides you a good opportunity to visit unknown centers, especially when you travel abroad. Because tourists are not likely familiar with the culture and language of foreign countries, they need to be guided by a person who knows well the attractive sights of that country such as recreational centers, seasonal events, performances, to name a few. In fact, increasing the number of people who want visit other places each year, have revolutionized the tourism industry and many specialized tour leaders were employed to lead tourists. In other words, tour leaders know the tourist attractions very perfect and are able to respond to tourists' historical and cultural questions about the place.
Second, due to the lack of knowing the target place and also the challenges and dangers of journey, sometimes tourists encounter with serious problems may ruin the whole trip. In fact, the tourism agencies undertake the responsibility that there will not exist any problems for a tourist or a group of tourists during journey. I have experienced the same problem during my last trip to turkey because I did not know I was not allowed to bring some specific things to my country and I was kept for the whole day in Istanbul airport.
Until know I discussed some benefits of traveling with a tour leader, but it seems that traveling in a group would be also a great experience and makes a more pleasant time for families. During journey one can finds a lot of friends and spend the rest of trip with them. In addition children can play with each other during journey and parents have more time to spend on their own on the trip. Certainly, vising museums or concerts for children is not as pleasant as for adults. Traveling in groups causes the children to enjoy the trip more.
In fact, when one decides to plan for a trip, especially a foreign trip, should be cautious and be aware of the possible dangers may threaten him or his family. In the next step, he should consider which plan can be more convenient and fun for them. According to my experiences I would prefer to travel in a group along with a tour leader because of the aforementioned details.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 211, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'find'
Suggestion: find
...me for families. During journey one can finds a lot of friends and spend the rest of ...
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Line 7, column 275, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...nd spend the rest of trip with them. In addition children can play with each other durin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, well, as for, in addition, in fact, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2175.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 446.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87668161435 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66224709088 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511210762332 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 659.7 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6754378373 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.473684211 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4736842105 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15789473684 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158273841427 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571827028687 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622065591865 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962476803269 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517237172002 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.