Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should be required to help with household tasks as soon as they are able to do so.
Upon the question should children be required to help with household tasks as soon as they are able to do so, different people have different opinions based on their emotion, education, culture, etc. From my point of view, assigning various tasks to young children has many advantages. In the following paragraphs, I will try to explain my position more clearly.
First and foremost, children will learn how to cooperate with other family members effectively. Parents should distribute different tasks to different children. For example, when I was about seven years old, I had to vacuum my brother’s room and he was responsible to help me do my homework. So that we found new ways to cooperate with each other. Besides, I established good relationship with him and learnt how to communicate with my older brother easily and in a more convenient way.
In the second place, performing household tasks make children become responsible persons in the future. In my opinion, mothers should require their children to wash their dirty dishes. So that children will learn responsibility. Another advantage of requiring children to perform household tasks is that they will learn how to behave toward other people. For example my younger sister had to go to grocery and buy necessary things like bread. In my point of view, before this requirement, she was a shy girl but now she is an outgoing person and she is able to communicate with strangers.
Last but not least, doing several household tasks will increase their self-confidence. In my point of view, when young children complete their jobs perfectly, it has positive effects on their minds and they will find out they are able to perform assigned tasks without any difficulty.
Taking all the aforementioned reasons into account, it can be concluded that children should be required to help with household tasks because it has several benefits for them which I outlined above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, second, so, for example, in my opinion, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10691823899 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8255027595 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562893081761 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3152135625 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5294117647 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384081813205 0.236089414692 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120865127455 0.076458572812 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927726039612 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234375690257 0.150856017488 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722056055718 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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