Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters, email, or telephone calls. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer
Nowadays, with the rapid development of the technology, it has become an important part of the human's life. Some people think that face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters, email, or telephone calls. But others don not think like that. however, In my opinion, I strongly think that other types of communication, such as letters, email, or telephone calls is the better option because it is more convenient and more time-saving than face to face communication.
Firstly, other types of communication are preferable because it is convenient for everybody, especially for many people who live far from their family. For example, my uncle has lived and worked in America for 15 years, but my grandmother and my family are living in Vietnam so that it is very difficult to contact with him face to face. In spite of that, we can contact him through email or telephone calls. Furthermore, it is extremely helpful when you have to face up to an emergency situation. For instance, a few days ago, I need to bring my research for my literature class and I had left if at home. So I was totally worried because it is the deadline of the research. If I did not hand in the paper, I would have gotten a worse score. Then, in this case, I had to call my father to bring it to me. Thus, it is highly convenient for many people.
Secondly, I think other types of communication are the right choice because it is not time-consuming like face to face communication. People can communicate every time to everywhere they need to connect. They don't have to rearrange their first scheduled to meet each other, so they have more time to do their own works.
Some people think that when they contact face to face, I can express their truth emotion better than with other types of communication. However, I think that with other types of communication, they can also express their emotions. Today, people usually use the camera or skype to talk with other people. Through that, they can see each other and express their feeling about their stories or many things around them. Besides, it can avoid people from misunderstood the other's writing.
In conclusion, I feel that other kinds of communication are the correct one. I believe this because it is not inconvenient and time-consuming.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
... it has become an important part of the humans life. Some people think that face-to-fa...
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Line 1, column 284, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...ls. But others don not think like that. however, In my opinion, I strongly think that o...
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Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...o everywhere they need to connect. They dont have to rearrange their first scheduled...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'as to', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i feel', 'i think', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'in my opinion', 'in spite of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.200883002208 0.229887763892 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.147902869757 0.158761421928 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.083885209713 0.0866891130778 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0551876379691 0.046263068375 119% => OK
Pronouns: 0.108167770419 0.0685040099705 158% => OK
Prepositions: 0.134657836645 0.118717715034 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0176600441501 0.0351676179071 50% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.87501991938 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.037527593819 0.0309702414327 121% => OK
Particles: 0.00220750551876 0.00188951952338 117% => OK
Determiners: 0.0551876379691 0.0887237588012 62% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0154525386313 0.0209618222197 74% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00662251655629 0.0139019557991 48% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2316.0 2387.08602151 97% => OK
No of words: 399.0 408.028673835 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.8045112782 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.298245614035 0.338922669872 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.213032581454 0.251872472559 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.145363408521 0.174417080927 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.112781954887 0.112833075102 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87501991938 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471177944862 0.524397521467 90% => OK
Word variations: 50.5988532788 59.2087087015 85% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.347826087 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4812995689 48.84282405 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.695652174 120.699889404 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.347826087 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.95652173913 0.644075263715 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 38.6510842323 45.7405998639 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.13475177305 1.45489161554 78% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42807800197 0.300154397459 143% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.103422836472 0.103427244359 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.102511983099 0.0752933317313 136% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.487192804208 0.497263757937 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.171316624974 0.151897553556 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14833179274 0.114077575197 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135058082202 0.0781384742642 173% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.290244571409 0.336927656856 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0852252252956 0.067059652881 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27463873024 0.210909579961 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121834033477 0.0618886996521 197% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.91756272401 183% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
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Rates: 70 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21 Out of 30
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