Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The invention of the Internet has had negative effects on your civilization. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
The most important advancement in the field of technology was internet. Now a days, internet can be called abyss because of its vast nature. Many people believe that, internet has had negative effects on the civilization. But, in my opinion it has been the most helpful thing that was ever developed. Anything that you need is available on the internet. Hence, I believe, internet has uncountable benefits and has had very less negative effects.
To begin with, as the world is growing and the technology is advancing at a very fast rate, it is important to be up to date with the technology. Various certified courses are available online which can help you learn any technology sitting at home. For instance, during my summer break I had joined an Android development course online. In this course I learnt how to develop android applications. Learning of this technology helped me a lot in getting internships during my graduate school.
Furthermore, electronic transactions or e-money allows one to pay their bills online over the internet. For example, my father always pays the electricity bills online and the funds gets transferred directly to the merchant account. This process is safe and secure and all the most very convenient. Another important benefit is that, internet allows you to book airline tickets online. Now, a person does not have to go to the airport anymore for booking tickets. The ticket can be booked online and the person gets the confirmation on his/her email.
In conclusion, it is true that internet has had some negative effects like hacking, piracy or illegal pornography. But, the advantages of the same are so many, that they overshadow all the downsides and thus has an overall positive effect on the civilization. And therefore, no matter what the society believes, I personally will always be in favour of using the internet because it has done more good than harm.
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
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...e field of technology was internet. Now a days, internet can be called abyss because o...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ecause it has done more good than harm.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'in my opinion', 'it is true', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.224719101124 0.229887763892 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.176966292135 0.158761421928 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0842696629213 0.0866891130778 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.061797752809 0.046263068375 134% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0533707865169 0.0685040099705 78% => OK
Prepositions: 0.101123595506 0.118717715034 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0505617977528 0.0351676179071 144% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.77846694509 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0252808988764 0.0309702414327 82% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.101123595506 0.0887237588012 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0112359550562 0.0209618222197 54% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0112359550562 0.0139019557991 81% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1917.0 2387.08602151 80% => OK
No of words: 318.0 408.028673835 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.02830188679 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.38679245283 0.338922669872 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.292452830189 0.251872472559 116% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.191823899371 0.174417080927 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.122641509434 0.112833075102 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77846694509 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584905660377 0.524397521467 112% => OK
Word variations: 64.7457096382 59.2087087015 109% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.9 20.5533526081 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8780193227 48.84282405 59% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.85 120.699889404 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9 20.5533526081 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.65 0.644075263715 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 45.1452830189 45.7405998639 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.28846153846 1.45489161554 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417695857007 0.300154397459 139% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0854571870743 0.103427244359 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0520370317413 0.0752933317313 69% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.472175466535 0.497263757937 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.116253144296 0.151897553556 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147973527978 0.114077575197 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899925572377 0.0781384742642 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.263204696156 0.336927656856 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0627266943378 0.067059652881 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287984845032 0.210909579961 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766443163916 0.0618886996521 124% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.