Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, a lot of events occur in societies; they may have an impact on our daily life or not. Some people believe that we should not take those events serious because they do not affect their life, others as I do, believe that we should consider those events which are happened around the world. This essay will discuss why we should take care about the events that occur around us.
First of all, everything that happens beyond our national border maybe occurs for ours too, and we should always be conscious of events happening anywhere even it does not change anything in our life. Knowing about events and get information about other nationalities are crucial because of that people can get more awareness about the world they live; it can open new horizons to them and certainly broaden their outlook. For example, in some prosper countries like the United States of America people and the governments always have respect for human rights and try to introduce laws to limit rate race. By knowing such events and policy of other countries, people in my country can do the same thing in their own society to be a prospering country.
Secondly, we have an obligation to some events that happen in the world. The world would be a better place if people be aware of the news and take responsibilities about their role as a member of this society which is not limited to a small community of a country. If people know about happening in the world, they will be aware of some problems that other nationalities have, and as a human, they should take some steps to help them. For instance, in some African countries, children are passing away from some curable diseases. This may not have any effect on people who live in richer countries, but we are responsible for such problems and should do something to help them because of the humanitarian.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that people should consider the happing in the world and take action to help others. Knowing about events in other nationalities is important because the same things may occur for us and being responsible for some crucial problems in other societies is a duty for all cizens.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74734042553 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48334054275 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476063829787 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 565.2 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.3398365318 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.5 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179054131197 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07542793977 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514762107072 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127280600533 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494068332498 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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