Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for students to study history and literature than it is for them to study science and mathematics.
In all over the world, with the galloping rate of science and technology, no one can turn a blind eye to the numerous effects of studying on people’s lives. In fact, undoubtedly educational systems have profound impacts on not only societies thriving but also human’s lives. Although there are a group of people who hold the opinion that studying history and literature is important, I am in the belief that learning science and mathematics are more important because of their impacts on developing technology and human’s lives.
First and foremast, improvement in technology is a remarkable benefit of learning science and mathematics. It is crystal-clear that we are living in an age in which technology plays a significant role as far as the development of a nation is concerned. Undoubtedly, science and mathematics contribute to improving societies and also technology. To illustrate, when you surf the internet or watch TV, you see that in developed countries savants who have knowledge about sciences such as physics and biology have profound impacts on improving their societies. In addition, in my opinion, we cannot consider most facilities such as transportation systems, mobile, computers, and other amenities, without education sciences. As a result, learning science and mathematics provide an opportunity to make use of higher technology.
Moreover, living more convenient and healthier can be considered another advantage of studying science and mathematics. It goes without saying that in developed societies people are aware of roles of sciences such as biology and medicine in their lives. As a matter fact, with the development of these science people are healthier because doctors with new achievements in medicine can cure sick people easily. For example, my major was Genetic and now I work in a laboratory, so I can help people who suffer from cancer and I believe that without knowledge about these sciences, every day a large number of people die due to some diseases. As a consequence, what has made people’s lives so better and healthier is the vast range of improvement in sciences.
In a nutshell, according to the above-mentioned points and details, the modern society has gone through some changes by the enormous impact of science and mathematics. Can you consider high technology in modern societies without studying sciences? Do you have convenient life without any sciences? When you suffer from a disease, can you become health without improving in sciences? I absolutely believe no!
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 307, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'groups'?
Suggestion: groups
...uman's lives. Although there are a group of people who hold the opinion that stu...
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Line 3, column 589, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...owledge about these sciences, every day a large number of people die due to some diseases. As a c...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'such as', 'as a result', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25974025974 0.229887763892 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.142857142857 0.158761421928 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0887445887446 0.0866891130778 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.034632034632 0.046263068375 75% => OK
Pronouns: 0.04329004329 0.0685040099705 63% => OK
Prepositions: 0.149350649351 0.118717715034 126% => OK
Participles: 0.0519480519481 0.0351676179071 148% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.1141258417 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Infinitives: 0.012987012987 0.0309702414327 42% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0779220779221 0.0887237588012 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0151515151515 0.0209618222197 72% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0151515151515 0.0139019557991 109% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2544.0 2387.08602151 107% => OK
No of words: 402.0 408.028673835 99% => OK
Chars per words: 6.32835820896 5.86048508987 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.430348258706 0.338922669872 127% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.355721393035 0.251872472559 141% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.256218905473 0.174417080927 147% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.194029850746 0.112833075102 172% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1141258417 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507462686567 0.524397521467 97% => OK
Word variations: 55.9532879114 59.2087087015 95% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.1578947368 20.5533526081 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2281239579 48.84282405 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.894736842 120.699889404 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1578947368 20.5533526081 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.631578947368 0.644075263715 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 56.7300340403 45.7405998639 124% => OK
Elegance: 2.08823529412 1.45489161554 144% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262966801072 0.300154397459 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.129112442664 0.103427244359 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0679828055193 0.0752933317313 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.505922552277 0.497263757937 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.131219078402 0.151897553556 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102158262823 0.114077575197 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667902614445 0.0781384742642 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.35953750199 0.336927656856 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0485386278186 0.067059652881 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183637738131 0.210909579961 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031966142372 0.0618886996521 52% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.