Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A glance at people opinions toward public transportation brings to light a question that has been provoked a debate, namely, whether the Internet access can be more important than transportation facilities. The answer depends on some different factors and it is not possible to have the same conclusion for all people. In my opinion, in Atlanta, where I live, Internet access is crucial and vital.
The foremost reason why I am supporting this idea lies in the fact that in big cities like Atlanta, there are several highways which encourage people to use their own cars and public transportation is not the major issue. people are educated and prefer to drive their own vehicle instead of wasting the time to wait for buses or trains. There are two well-known universities, Georgia State University and Georgia Institute of Technology which attract students from all over the world. In this environment, better Internet speed and access, is the first concern for student because they have to search through google or find information from online resources. Therefore, I vote for better Internet to study faster an easier.
Another subtle point that I should deem is the fact that people normally live in suburban areas and it is nearly impossible to construct metro stations all over the state. For example, for people who live in Johns creek, it takes 2 hours to reach downtown if they want to use public transportation and even if there was any Marta station there, few people would like to use it and it is not economical to spend too much budget on something that very limited people use it. Instead, if the Internet connection is excellent, assist people to work remotely and do not commute. Thus, public transportation does not make life easier at all.
Admittedly, there are several benefits to have public transportation such as less pollution and less traffic. In some cities like New York, the population is that much high that nobody can tolerate traffic and people prefer to ride metro. Nevertheless, this concern is not substantial in Atlanta which has about two millions population. Hence, for some other cities, public transportation is a definite solution.
Due to aforementioned argument explored in the previous statements, I would suggest to governor to spend more money on the Internet rather than public transportation.
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Suggestion: People
... transportation is not the major issue. people are educated and prefer to drive their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1968.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09844559585 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83151496186 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569948186528 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9507562002 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.764705882 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7058823529 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187159746783 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570432185581 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489247794604 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114733010897 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514149585381 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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