Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Leadership comes naturally one cannot learn to be a leader Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Leadership comes naturally: one cannot learn to be a leader.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

No doubt, these days learn how to be a good leader is very important factor in whole world. Especially in big companies. Therefor, many companies start to select their manager belong whom has academic knowledge about leadership, although before all managers had only experience to be leader, but now, they need to be educated too. In my point of view, I believes that a person can learn to be a leader, base on many factors. Here, I am going to mention all elements.
To begin, being leader is not natural, because many strategies they need to know which only improve with studying and searching and is much better to be educated through college. As a result, it easy to recognise a person with good strategy and politic from a person who is leader by experience or as they said naturally. For example, some companies with old managers which claim that, they are very good to being a good manager and lead employees perfectly , Although, they have experience, even wrong one , but still they need to read many books to be aware of their faults and correct them.
Secondly, all people can be a leader if and only if they were worked by good managers and learn from them. As a result , person with different characteristics can be good or bad leader upon on the environment which he or she worked before or even university might they studied , in this case their professors had very good role to make their characters. For instance, a guy working in a company with disaster boss , definitely he will be non organise leader in future , may be many employee will be under him in future, but as a leader, he never can lead them to reach a sufficient result.
To sum up, person who wants to be a good leader, always should study and read many articles or have a degree from college in this field .In addition to that, he or she should be lucky to be in a good environments with professional leaders to learn from them. Broadly, good leadership and being acceptable leader is not naturally.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 268, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'experienced'.
Suggestion: experienced
..., although before all managers had only experience to be leader, but now, they need to be ...
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Line 1, column 355, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'believe'
Suggestion: believe
...be educated too. In my point of view, I believes that a person can learn to be a leader,...
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Line 2, column 457, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ood manager and lead employees perfectly , Although, they have experience, even wr...
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Line 2, column 506, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...gh, they have experience, even wrong one , but still they need to read many books ...
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Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...anagers and learn from them. As a result , person with different characteristics c...
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Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...re or even university might they studied , in this case their professors had very ...
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Line 3, column 413, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... working in a company with disaster boss , definitely he will be non organise lead...
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Line 3, column 458, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...finitely he will be non organise leader in future , may be many employee will be under hi...
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Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...he will be non organise leader in future , may be many employee will be under him ...
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Line 3, column 477, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun employee seems to be countable; consider using: 'many employees'.
Suggestion: many employees
... non organise leader in future , may be many employee will be under him in future, but as a l...
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Line 3, column 509, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... may be many employee will be under him in future, but as a leader, he never can lead the...
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Line 4, column 136, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...have a degree from college in this field .In addition to that, he or she should be...
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Line 4, column 137, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ve a degree from college in this field .In addition to that, he or she should be l...
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Line 4, column 200, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'environment'?
Suggestion: environment
... or she should be lucky to be in a good environments with professional leaders to learn fro...
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Line 4, column 230, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in a good environments with professional leaders to learn from them. Broadly, goo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, for example, for instance, in addition, no doubt, as a result, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60169491525 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57768049385 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516949152542 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.7857432771 48.9658058833 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.307692308 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2307692308 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 5.45110844103 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168031705788 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780502326028 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408642775933 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126369882209 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169250164101 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 58.1214874552 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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