Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Life is precious and important especially human life. Life is full of certainty and uncertainty. It is the basic human tendency to lead a happier and easygoing life. For this reason day by day human endeavors and accomplishments is going on. Today’s life is more fast and enjoyable than our grandparents childhood time-someone agree with this, others might have another position. In my view our modern life is more fast and luxurious than our grandparents boyhood time. I think in that way for the following two important reason.
The main reason is that, by passing days science is going to accomplish another milestones that influences our lives wholeheartedly. In our present time every arenas of our live the crystal picture of scientific discoveries is noticeable. For example, during our grandparents childhood time, discovery of science was scarce. In the field of medical science, many treatments, prognosis of disease, pathogenic disease vaccination program was unavailable. On that time, many children were died due to cholera, diphtheria, typhoid. But today, the death on these type of disease is surprising due to invention of potential vaccines and medicines. Another thing is that, when our grandparents were children, it was unbelievable to land on the man and launching satellite on the exoplanet. But such accomplishment have been made possible by scientific discovery. As you can see that, day by day science advancement made it possible to eradicate disease and also possible to land on the moon.
Another reason is that the modern age is full of communication that reduce the distance by improving transportation facilities and launching Social Medias. In our time, airplane has improve a lot, within a few hours it is possible to go on end to another end of the world. Now it is possible to know every information within seconds by using internet. It let people know what is happening another parts of the world now. It also reduce the mind distance by sharing video calls. For instance, on our grandparent’s childhood the above facilities were quite unimaginable. They communicate with others by simply sending letters that took days to months to reach the receiver. And also they were using barefoot, boats driven by human to go one place to another. This experience taught me that, by advancement of aerospace and boon of internet, the life on this age is more fast and comfortable than before.
In sum, scientific discover made our live more easy and enjoyable than our grandparents childhood time. It is not only improve in medical, landing on the moon but also reduce the distance both physical and virtual. As a result, it would be a kind of crime if we don't recognize the boon of science.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
...ocial Medias. In our time, airplane has improve a lot, within a few hours it is possibl...
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Line 5, column 430, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reduces'?
Suggestion: reduces
...another parts of the world now. It also reduce the mind distance by sharing video call...
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Line 7, column 263, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...sult, it would be a kind of crime if we dont recognize the boon of science.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, another thing, for example, for instance, i think, kind of, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2283.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07333333333 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97104462653 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 720.9 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2103805311 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5357142857 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0714285714 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177922993776 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474810616421 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447754439324 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107936934096 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498982546235 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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