Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? As long as they meet deadlines and attend meetings, company employees should be allowed to work any hours they choose. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answers.
Not many years ago, strict rules were laid out surrounding work hours. Office hours were set and employees were expected to work within this time period. However, in light of factors, such as people wanting to have a work-life balance or the recent lockdowns during the epidemic, these policies have loosened up.
The vast majority of the working population, specifically parents, wish to balance their work and everyday life. Unlike in the past, today’s parents want to prioritize spending time with their families and friends rather than being a workaholic. Instead of looking after their children while working at the same time, they prefer to divide time amongst both these duties. For example, parents may work when their children are at school, and tend to them when they are at home.
Besides parents, there are students who work a part-time job, or sometimes, a full-time one, in order to pay their tuition fees or to gain experience. Nonetheless, it is crucial for them to manage their time efficiently. Students may prefer to work more hours on the weekend, accommodating time to study during the week.
In the end, companies are concerned about the end results. As long as the staff meets deadlines and attends meetings, how an employee reaches these milestones should be left for them to decide. The lockdowns that were sanctioned due to the COVID-19 epidemic, are proof that this method of working is not only feasible, but also worthwhile, since companies saw better performance as employees were better motivated due to improved job satisfaction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 81, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'meets'' or 'meet's'?
Suggestion: meets'; meet's
...t the end results. As long as the staff meets deadlines and attends meetings, how an ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, look, may, nonetheless, so, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 257.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13618677043 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62996451481 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622568093385 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2941899189 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.538461538 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157787110103 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551519748225 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466124298177 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887598474974 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441446403494 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 81, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'meets'' or 'meet's'?
Suggestion: meets'; meet's
...t the end results. As long as the staff meets deadlines and attends meetings, how an ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, look, may, nonetheless, so, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 257.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13618677043 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62996451481 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622568093385 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2941899189 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.538461538 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157787110103 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551519748225 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466124298177 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887598474974 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441446403494 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.