Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most advertisements make products seem much better then they really are.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When it comes to the issue that most advertisements make products better than they really are, some people may agree with this idea and give us sound reasons for their beliefs. On the other hand, some other people might disagree and have different opinions. Also, those opponents may have the right to believe in that. I believe that most advertisements make products better than they really are because there are so many reasons. This short essay will demonstrate some points regarding my point o view in the following paragraph:
First of all, in my opinion, it is widely understood that most advertisements make products better they really to attract customers. Advertisement is the single greatest determinant of the product succeed in the market. So, the advertisements mention just the good points of the product in order to increase the sell of the products. However, the bad things of the products are neglect in the advertisements.
Another point why I advocate that advertisements make products better than they really are because the rapid development of the technology today. In the advertisement they use the technology to make the product look very good and nice. Additionally, the size may seem different in the advertisement. Moreover, the use of the technology to enhance the look of the product make the costumer trust the products and bye it because such things have great impact on the person opinion.
Finally, it is a-well established fact that the competitions between the manufactures today are very high. So, each company tries to win the race by advertising their products in many different ways. For instance, they focus on the point that attract the costumers and trying by say overwhelmingly and magic things.
From what has been discussed above, we may draw a conclusion which says that, people who hold opposite idea may have the right to believe in that, but my opinion and other people opinions are overwhelmingly too much to be ignored.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 180, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...e race by advertising their products in many different ways. For instance, they focus on the p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, really, regarding, so, well, for instance, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08895705521 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88034849755 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51226993865 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8004124055 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.6875 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 5.45110844103 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279104748792 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937480108283 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884667170729 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144540907106 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0941974951794 0.0645574589148 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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