Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources.
In the modern life, dozens of news are generated every day which play a prominent role in each individual's life. As investigation have demonstrated, there is a direct correlation between number of news sources and people's knowledge. A controversy which often raised here is that whether a person must get information from many various news sources in order to be well-informed or not. I personally contend that people should cover variety of news sources in order to get informed of them. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons to support my point of view.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that based on my personal experience, news sources are usually inconsistent with respect to cover news details. In other word, some news may provide a superficial foundation to just announce title of significant news, while others offer more detail. For the purpose of illustration, I am accustomed to read sports news through a well-knowned online website since it provides a exhaustive news detail about that sport event. Furthermore, When I am busy with my occupation tasks, I am not capable to read those news with more detail; therefore, I will read those title news through my smart phone which requires less available time.
Another indispensable point which deserves some words here is that according to a social standpoint, with such a plan, we are able to acquire adequate cover over an specific news. For instance, some news agency are supported by huge amount of budget to be devoted to particular fields, which leads to better covering of news. However, some other agencies establish a plan to serve another type of news information such as multimedia or online video that all of them will cover each aspect of that news. Therefore, it provides a great opportunities for people to well-informed of a specific news in all crucial aspects.
Actually, there is another subtle point which must be borne in mind that several recent studies have unveiled the fact that there are couple of reliable sources among all news agencies, which make people more satisfied. Besides, in this hectic life, news agency waiting for some beneficial chances in order to abuse people with several unrealistic news. For instance, a noteworthy refreshingly statistics, revealed by recent social research conducted in our country, represent majority of people are encountered with oceans of misleading news which have a negative consequences in their future life, Therefore, finding a reliable news source will be critical.
To wrap it up, all of the aforementioned reasons lead us to te conclusion that news sources have a direct impact on people's life. Contemplating all points, people should redirect to various news sources to be more informed. But that was a story in a nutshell; as a matter of fact; there are more reasons and examples to support this statement. All in all, it is highly recommended a survey be conducted in order to evaluate general opinion of ordinary people regarding such an issue.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[4]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'accustomed to reading'.
Suggestion: accustomed to reading
.... For the purpose of illustration, I am accustomed to read sports news through a well knowned onli...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...nowned online website since it provides a exhaustive news detail about that sport...
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Line 3, column 549, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'those newses'?
Suggestion: this news; those newses
...upation tasks, I am not capable to read those news with more detail; therefore, I will rea...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...are able to acquire adequate cover over an specific news. For instance, some news ...
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Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'specific news'.
Suggestion: specific news
...are able to acquire adequate cover over an specific news. For instance, some news agency are sup...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d by huge amount of budget to be devoted to particular fields, which leads to bet...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'opportunity'?
Suggestion: opportunity
...at news. Therefore, it provides a great opportunities for people to well informed of a specif...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'specific news'.
Suggestion: specific news
...tunities for people to well informed of a specific news in all crucial aspects. Actually, ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'consequence'?
Suggestion: consequence
...f misleading news which have a negative consequences in their future life, Therefore, findin...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...rce will be critical. To wrap it up, all of the aforementioned reasons lead us to te co...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'besides', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'regarding', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'while', 'for instance', 'such as', 'as a matter of fact', 'with respect to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.256183745583 0.229887763892 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.148409893993 0.158761421928 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.111307420495 0.0866891130778 128% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0335689045936 0.046263068375 73% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0353356890459 0.0685040099705 52% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125441696113 0.118717715034 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0388692579505 0.0351676179071 111% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.88094962739 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0388692579505 0.0309702414327 126% => OK
Particles: 0.0017667844523 0.00188951952338 94% => OK
Determiners: 0.0971731448763 0.0887237588012 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0159010600707 0.0209618222197 76% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0159010600707 0.0139019557991 114% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3068.0 2387.08602151 129% => OK
No of words: 503.0 408.028673835 123% => OK
Chars per words: 6.09940357853 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73578520332 4.48200974243 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.365805168986 0.338922669872 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.278330019881 0.251872472559 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.188866799205 0.174417080927 108% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.129224652087 0.112833075102 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88094962739 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506958250497 0.524397521467 97% => OK
Word variations: 60.018487161 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 25.15 20.5533526081 122% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0186161816 48.84282405 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.4 120.699889404 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.15 20.5533526081 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.85 0.644075263715 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.54480286738 180% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 52.9830019881 45.7405998639 116% => OK
Elegance: 1.93495934959 1.45489161554 133% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29683542112 0.300154397459 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.10677614831 0.103427244359 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0529098401266 0.0752933317313 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.563463898886 0.497263757937 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0808860980627 0.151897553556 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124519875531 0.114077575197 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729844536312 0.0781384742642 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.363609822044 0.336927656856 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0368001060715 0.067059652881 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199802536057 0.210909579961 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576665176722 0.0618886996521 93% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 15.0 8.42114695341 178% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
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Rates: 87 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 26 Out of 30