Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to succeed in a new job, the ability to adapt oneself to the new environment is more important than having profound knowledge about this job.
In this fiercely competitive society, achieving a success career is considered vital important by most individuals and plenty of new graduates complain about that it is hard to succeed in a new job position. Although some people argue that the ability of adaptation to a new environment is more important when starting a new job, from my perspective, I still hold the belief that it is more helpful for freshmen to have profound knowledge and professional skills when they are at the beginning point of their career.
To begin with, there is nothing but a solid professional background could help new graduates to become outstanding in their new job position. We could imagine that, if a person knows nothing about his job and always make stupid mistakes in his job, he or she would absolutely be fired by his or her manager. Therefore, one cannot stay long on the job position without an abundant storage of professional skills related to the job.
In addition, a lack of deep understand of the job position could prevent a person from future development in this area, which means that he or she could only deal with the fundamental work in the company rather than enter the core of the area he or she worked for. As a result, he or she could just work as a small clerk in the company so that the true success would never come to him or her even if he or she has a strong adaptation to the new environment.
Admittedly, the ability to adapt oneself to the new environment could not be ignored when starting a new job. which could make one person get accustomed to the new job relatively faster than others. However, this kind of ability is not the key factor of a success career. People who do not handle this ability well could also get used to the new job after spending a slightly longer time period. Also, a deep learning of the area of the job could speed up this process so that it is acceptable for a person to have a weak ability of adaptation if he or she do maintain a solid professional background about this job.
In conclusion, although some people tend to highlight the importance of the ability of adaptation, it could not weaken the essence of the solid storage of the professional knowledge when starting a brand new job as is proved by reasons and examples presented above.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 111, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...not be ignored when starting a new job. which could make one person get accustomed to...
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Line 7, column 111, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...not be ignored when starting a new job. which could make one person get accustomed to...
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Line 7, column 558, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...weak ability of adaptation if he or she do maintain a solid professional backgroun...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60827250608 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6858073961 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467153284672 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 601.2 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.4417046253 48.9658058833 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.692307692 100.406767564 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6153846154 20.6045352989 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 5.45110844103 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399550905197 0.236089414692 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16390809442 0.076458572812 214% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819097931764 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230653713558 0.150856017488 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112797321164 0.0645574589148 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 11.7677419355 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.05 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 10.002688172 195% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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