Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When it comes to the issue that who is the beast teacher? Some people believe that parents have an undeniable role in everyone’s life. However, others maintain the opposite view. In their opinion, parent does not possess a main factor for this aim. As far as I am concerned, the former point carries more weight. I take this position account the following reasons.
First at all, their teaching is more effective. From the emotional angel, the bond between parents and children so tough that children more and better learn of them. I think that a small example can give some light to this matter. Surely, we all had some teacher that we had a good relationship with them. As a result, we learn better their lesson. In this way, it is quit normal that parents can increase my knowledge better than others.
Second point to take into account is that, parents shape our character. As we all know, every student should go to school to gain the academic education. Nevertheless, you can not summarize all knowledge on what is taught in academic departments. A great deal of professional teacher focus on theoretical topics and evade of involving in student’s real problems. On the contrary, parent does not teach Mathematics, Biology, Chemistry, and so on. They are much involved in giving us lesson about being independent, strong and confident, and which I right or wrong. To sum up, they have important role in molding our character, which the main feature for having a successful life.
Last but not least, their experience is availed to us at every time. On the one hand, they start their teaching process as soon as we are born and never sop teaching us. In the initial years of our lives, they teach us to speak, to walk, to have good manners before we reach “the real world.” On the other hand, their experiences are a priceless treasure, which are available to us without any cost. If we are faced with problems, we can use their experience for find solutions.
Summarizing the mentioned the above, I want to admit that non one can ignore parents’ role in children’s grow and development. They have significant impact on our character, and also their teaching is more effective and continual. I hope that the next generation reaches deep understanding of parents’ efforts, and being appreciated of them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...onship with them. As a result, we learn better their lesson. In this way, it is quit n...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'second', 'so', 'i think', 'in fact', 'as a result', 'on the contrary', 'to sum up', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.201257861635 0.229887763892 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.148846960168 0.158761421928 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.100628930818 0.0866891130778 116% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0398322851153 0.046263068375 86% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0901467505241 0.0685040099705 132% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.104821802935 0.118717715034 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0314465408805 0.0351676179071 89% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.82590685352 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0251572327044 0.0309702414327 81% => OK
Particles: 0.0020964360587 0.00188951952338 111% => OK
Determiners: 0.0796645702306 0.0887237588012 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0125786163522 0.0209618222197 60% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0125786163522 0.0139019557991 90% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2349.0 2387.08602151 98% => OK
No of words: 397.0 408.028673835 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.91687657431 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.314861460957 0.338922669872 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.244332493703 0.251872472559 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.173803526448 0.174417080927 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.125944584383 0.112833075102 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82590685352 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561712846348 0.524397521467 107% => OK
Word variations: 65.029473952 59.2087087015 110% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.2692307692 20.5533526081 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4768488818 48.84282405 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3461538462 120.699889404 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2692307692 20.5533526081 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.538461538462 0.644075263715 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 39.7024801395 45.7405998639 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.21052631579 1.45489161554 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243619271201 0.300154397459 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0661216724622 0.103427244359 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0494271826366 0.0752933317313 66% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.417426172963 0.497263757937 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.10900723947 0.151897553556 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747701070853 0.114077575197 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559324286267 0.0781384742642 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.258177193666 0.336927656856 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0489618763924 0.067059652881 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157673972076 0.210909579961 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293845887882 0.0618886996521 47% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.91756272401 203% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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