Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past it was easier to identify what kind of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Having a decent job or career is crucial need; nowadays people try to find a job which can build up their future as good as possible. It is an arguable issue that what kind of work can make a brilliant future for job seekers. Some people claim that in the modern society it would be difficult that people to recognize what kind of profession can be suitable to them. But, others as I do, think different. I think there are a variety of ways which can lead people to achieve a suitable career. I think this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, there are some facilities which can benefit people to get information about today's career. Thanks to the technology people can gain a lot of data about every topics especially some important issues like the jobs which they want to apply for. For example, the Internet has given people access to information on a level never experience before. Job seekers can get connect to the Internet and search about their favorite jobs as easy as pie. They not only can access to a wide variety of choice and eclectic jobs but also can get information about different aspects of the job. They can use others' experience and get a far deeper understanding about the profession.
Secondly, the variety of jobs which are innovated in new era are causing people to have a range of choices. The diversity of career give the chance to people that find their interested job. And because of this people can satisfy with their job. For instance, as a Robotic engineer, these days I have some alternatives about my job which I had never experienced before. By the innovation of robotics on its improvement on industries I get a chance to put into practice my knowledge which not only causes me the mental satisfaction but also lead me a secure profession.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that these day people can prosperous jobs more than any time in the past. This is because in modern era the facilities which can help people to find their jobs is available and because the variety of jobs is as much as possible.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60053619303 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54657257444 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477211796247 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7170810975 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3157894737 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6315789474 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78947368421 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119320782074 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487909484532 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0223370241075 0.0737576698707 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825725896679 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311908686392 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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