Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are more educated today than they were before.
Undoubtedly, education plays a pivotal role in people’s life. Individuals take advantage of their learning since the dawn of humanity. The significance of education in our life has raised a question about the quality of education over time. Indeed, there is increasingly heated controversy as to whether people are more educated today than they were in past. Answers to this question vary from person to person based on their experiences, characteristics, and their social positions, to name but three. Some people believe that people in the past were equal to today’s people in terms of education, while others believe otherwise—that is—people today are more well-educated than in the past. I, for one, subscribe to latter group for quite a few reasons, and three conspicuous ones of which have been elaborated upon in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, thanks to technological advancements, countries have more efficient educational system. Nowadays, technologies improve in a galloping rate. It is incontrovertibly axiomatic studying is much easier than in past, which lead to better learning. Students can easily attend in online courses and access to modern libraries via the Internet. For example, when I was at university I could easily have access to invaluable materials which were crucial for my research. In addition, today, students study abroad to take advantage of well-equipped facilities and laboratories. In the past, however, it was impossible to access such priceless material and equipment.
Additionally, in today’s scientific world, education, being well-informed, and being knowledgeable are pre-requisites of getting a proper career. In order to promote in one’s job, he or she should improve their education. Statistics demonstrate that the rate of unemployment among people who hold academic degrees is drastically less than uneducated ones. On the other hand, in past, people become hired just by a little basic knowledge because, unlike today, it does not special need to high-level specialties. Accordingly, people tend to require gain more knowledge and become well-educated if they seek an appropriate job. Therefore, nowadays, people are more educated in comparison to the past.
Eventually, nowadays parents who are upbringing their kids are so sensible to their children’s future. Hence they do their best to provide proper educational opportunity for their kids. In fact parents believe that better education leads to successful life. There is a famous proverb which states “A person who opens a school door, closes the prison”, which is indicative of importance of education. Furthermore, families, today's, have fewer children and higher income, which brings about better chance for enjoying high quality education. At the same time, in past, due to insufficient resources in both family and society, there was less opportunity to proper education.
To draw the conclusion grounded on the above statements, nowadays, people are more educated which has its roots in the better educational system, the necessity of education for career, and access to better facilities since childhood. Therefore, it is highly recommended that people not take education for granted, and flourish their values.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, in addition, in fact, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 52.1666666667 155% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2791.0 1977.66487455 141% => OK
No of words: 496.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62701612903 4.8611393121 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18701920432 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 278.0 212.727598566 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560483870968 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 887.4 618.680645161 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9228049759 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6785714286 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46428571429 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253938763827 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695512613674 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840715672236 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146269563724 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780319866144 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 58.1214874552 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 10.9000537634 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 149.0 86.8835125448 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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