Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Everyone has their own preferred ways for spending times. Some people argue that person should spend free time doing thing that he does not enjoy. In my opinion, I think that this statement is correct for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, doing activities that you don not enjoy will return in benefits on you. Such as, you will learn to be patient and to control yourself and your feelings. Human usually is comfortable doing what he likes but once he started doing thing he does not like he will feel in boring and stress. If you trained yourself to spend free time on doing activities you don not enjoy, one after another you will learn to control your feeling and will be comfortable. My experience is a good example of this. I do not like running sport, but my friends do this sport every week. In the first time I attended them was very bad and I felt in boring. But by time I started to enjoy it and nowadays I go with them every week for running.
Furthermore, another advantage for spending times doing things you do not like is getting new knowledge or experience that you cannot have unless you do what you hate. Books contains not only information but also experience in different fields. But sometimes you have to try things even if you don’t like. A good example of this is the camping. If you waste a week reading a book about camping and problems that may face you and how to solve it, you will have no practical part or experience in camping. But once you did it for once in your life you gain that experience and you will never lose it while you will forget what you read in books.
In conclusion, I think People should spend time doing things they do not like. This is because They will break the routine of their life, learn to control their feeling and will gain experience by doing these stuff.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is usually
...ntrol yourself and your feelings. Human usually is comfortable doing what he likes but onc...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'while', 'i think', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'in my opinion', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.170212765957 0.229887763892 74% => OK
Verbs: 0.215425531915 0.158761421928 136% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0478723404255 0.0866891130778 55% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0478723404255 0.046263068375 103% => OK
Pronouns: 0.13829787234 0.0685040099705 202% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.114361702128 0.118717715034 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0372340425532 0.0351676179071 106% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.2699596869 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0239361702128 0.0309702414327 77% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0531914893617 0.0887237588012 60% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0398936170213 0.0209618222197 190% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0159574468085 0.0139019557991 115% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1870.0 2387.08602151 78% => OK
No of words: 343.0 408.028673835 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45189504373 5.86048508987 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.244897959184 0.338922669872 72% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.186588921283 0.251872472559 74% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.107871720117 0.174417080927 62% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.067055393586 0.112833075102 59% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2699596869 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483965014577 0.524397521467 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.8194233256 59.2087087015 84% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0526315789 20.5533526081 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9710421496 48.84282405 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4210526316 120.699889404 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0526315789 20.5533526081 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.684210526316 0.644075263715 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 36.7115237072 45.7405998639 80% => OK
Elegance: 0.801324503311 1.45489161554 55% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330603797666 0.300154397459 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0862196941431 0.103427244359 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.083197323931 0.0752933317313 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.466784243457 0.497263757937 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.185971220439 0.151897553556 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116041305377 0.114077575197 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784303641056 0.0781384742642 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.279750319855 0.336927656856 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.121560767343 0.067059652881 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218387441754 0.210909579961 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317288259409 0.0618886996521 51% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.