Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should buy things made in their own country, even if they are more expensive than things made in other countries.
There is no doubt that in today's hectic city of life, in which life has trials and tribulations, people bend over backward and make efforts so as to lead a gratifying life. Indeed, there are majorities of viewpoints regarding the modern life. Various points of view which are germane to the matter being discussed brings us to the moot question as to whether human beings should rely on products made up of their own country or buy them from overseas. However, the popular sentiment to which I vehemently cling is that people should try to help the economy of the country where they live in order to make a progress day in day out. The underlying aim of this essay is to put forward some cogent reasons to shed light on a number of issues in this framework.
To commence with, there are vast majorities of mammoth corporations in the world, which produce various items in different realms. Generally phrased, people have different viewpoint whether buy things from their own country or not. But buy different things made of their own country can provide an opportunity for the society to flourish and thrive. As a palpable example, two years ago my country ran into a huge problem because of inflation and economic recession. From that time, people of different cities started to buy things made up of their own country and after a short period of time the nation recover from economic recession owing to the fact myriads of companies survived and improved their productions. As a result, inflation diminishes extensively and people witness the prosperity of the economy. To elucidate more on this issue, buy things from own country not only can make the economy prosperous but also can provide fertile ground for the society to be flourished.
Another equally salient point in corroborating my stance is that if people buy different products from foreign countries, there will be no more job available for people in their country. If we take a minute to ponder over it, crowds of people look for a decent and a well-paid job in order to make a vast sum of money. So, if individuals neglect the production of their country, corporations will soon bankrupt and we soon witness a dropout rate among workers. It can be deduced from a combination of breadth of coverage and depth of detail that the more purchases from our own country, the more jobs will be available for juveniles in the society.
However, every coin has two sides. Sometimes productions of our own country do not have enough quality to attract people's attention. In fact, nowadays, people prefer to buy high-quality productions regardless of which country has made them. For instance, in my country vast majorities of people are interested in foreign cars or automobiles due to the paucity of qualities and standards of our cars. However, it was a story in a nutshell; actually, there are more reasonable grounds that can lend weight to my personal perspective.
In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, look, regarding, so, well, as to, for instance, in fact, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 85.0 52.1666666667 163% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2483.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 508.0 407.700716846 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88779527559 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74751043592 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69657378316 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498031496063 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 775.8 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8118592587 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.863636364 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241115215007 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679919240465 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651979403002 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111675082179 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723679116434 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 86.8835125448 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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