Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should
sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons
and examples to support your answer.
People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing
The topic under discussion is whether people should do things that they don’t want to. Well, no one wants to do the things that they don’t like to do. But, this is not what happens in reality. Almost everyone has to do things they do not enjoy doing. So, I agree with the statement that people should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing because of the following specific reasons.
First, considering working people, it is not always possible to get a desired job and therefore, sometimes people end up with jobs that they don’t enjoy doing. For instance, a security guard has to be awake all night when he is on duty. Obviously, he doesn’t enjoy it. But, he is obliged to do it because it pays him only with which he can support his family. Security guard is just an example. Most of the people don’t end up with their dream jobs and many of them don’t enjoy doing their jobs. They just do so to support themselves and their family.
Second, sometimes to achieve what we desire for, we have to do things that we don’t like to do. For instance, considering me as an example, I love engineering and want to become a good engineer. To become a good engineer I have to earn a degree and to earn a degree I have to pass all the exams. Now, I get nervous during exams and I definitely don’t enjoy giving them. Still, I attend those exams because it is the only way to fulfil my dream of becoming a good engineer. Hence, sometimes to achieve greater things, one might have to do things that he/she doesn’t enjoy doing.
Also, sometimes a person might have to do some things so as not to hurt the people he/she loves. Again, considering me as an example, I don’t like romantic movies in my mother tongue because they seem mawkish to me. Still, I had to go to a romantic movie just because all the other members of my family wanted to watch that movie. Hence, sometimes one has to do things for the sake of people he/she loves.
Thus, life shows us many situations where a person has to do things that he/she doesn’t enjoy doing. Hence, I think that a people should sometimes do things that they don’t enjoy doing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hings that they don't enjoy doing.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'as to', 'for instance', 'i think']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.172277227723 0.229887763892 75% => OK
Verbs: 0.225742574257 0.158761421928 142% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0316831683168 0.0866891130778 37% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0594059405941 0.046263068375 128% => OK
Pronouns: 0.106930693069 0.0685040099705 156% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0831683168317 0.118717715034 70% => OK
Participles: 0.0316831683168 0.0351676179071 90% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.47329336599 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0534653465347 0.0309702414327 173% => OK
Particles: 0.0039603960396 0.00188951952338 210% => OK
Determiners: 0.0594059405941 0.0887237588012 67% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0138613861386 0.0209618222197 66% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00990099009901 0.0139019557991 71% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2254.0 2387.08602151 94% => OK
No of words: 409.0 408.028673835 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51100244499 5.86048508987 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.317848410758 0.338922669872 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.178484107579 0.251872472559 71% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.122249388753 0.174417080927 70% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0880195599022 0.112833075102 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47329336599 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.403422982885 0.524397521467 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 42.775573481 59.2087087015 72% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0416666667 20.5533526081 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8451334102 48.84282405 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9166666667 120.699889404 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0416666667 20.5533526081 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.583333333333 0.644075263715 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 34.8900774246 45.7405998639 76% => OK
Elegance: 0.732323232323 1.45489161554 50% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.423089504223 0.300154397459 141% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.145627664251 0.103427244359 141% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.114706245592 0.0752933317313 152% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.536965431168 0.497263757937 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.187117362503 0.151897553556 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169625650374 0.114077575197 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144915959158 0.0781384742642 185% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.417825594624 0.336927656856 124% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.137421663151 0.067059652881 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.326790808949 0.210909579961 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138228420889 0.0618886996521 223% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8870967742 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 15.0 8.42114695341 178% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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