Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, using of computer games are dramatically increased; some people believe that children should not play such games because it is a waste of time. Others, as I do, believe that playing computer games not only is not a waste of time but also have several advantages for children. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explore more in the following essay.
First of all, computer games can help children to flourish their intellectual abilities. These days the number of computer games which are created to boost children abilities to solve some educational problems are much more than ever before. By spending time on such games children are able to solve many complex problems which make them smarter. My own experience is a compelling example of what I mean, my little brother had some problems on his math course. When I noticed his problem I suggested him to install "Enjoy Math by Game" program on his tablet - the program I had advised is a brilliant game which helps students to do some mathematic problems by that game, students not only can play and enjoy of their time but also can learn. After trying that game my brother could make progress in his math skills day by day.
Moreover, computer games are a safe way for children to engage themselves. The outdoor environments are a dangerous place for children. Computer games are a good alternative for children to keep them safe because they can do it at home. In addition, in some seasons like winter the weather is not good enough for outing. Therefore, gaming with their peers at home can avoid children getting sick.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that computer games can be beneficial for children. It can help them to study better and improve their educational skills, and protect them by provide a safe place for gaming to them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 753, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...enjoy of their time but also can learn. After trying that game my brother could make ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, moreover, so, therefore, i feel, i mean, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78548895899 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55774070197 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520504731861 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2097485782 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8125 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8125 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275748261453 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104277160098 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763934500563 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188217711381 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792130517867 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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