Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Reading fiction (such as novels and short stories) is more enjoyable than watching movies. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
Nowadays, many books both fiction and nonfiction are being played into films. There are many cases where one finds himself or herself having a book and its movie at the same time. To some, it's a hard decision to make, whether to watch the movie or read the book as all contain the same story. The best choice varies from one person to another. In my point of view, I prefer reading fiction to watching movies.
First of all, reading fiction increases the suspense in the story. While reading a book, there is something about not knowing who the characters are what makes the story even more interesting. It arouses one's curiosity about what is going to happen, how is this going to react? Although the person watching a movie can also get curious, it won't be the same curiosity as that of a book reader because he or she is imagining a lot of things boosts up the suspense of the story, as a result, the story gets more interesting. For example, there is a book called "To all the boys I have loved before." It has a movie. I watched the movie before I got to know that there existed its book. While watching the movie, I was interested and hooked since the beginning because it really is a good story, however, I can't compare this feeling to the one I had while reading the book. I read the book after watching the movie, but still, I was captivated by the story in the book as if I had not seen the movie. From that, one can conclude that reading fiction is way better than watching a movie.
Moreover, when one reads fiction he or she gets more out of the story than he or she can while watching the movie. This is true. Whenever one reads a fiction book, one gets to deeply see in the minds of the characters, especially when it's written using the first point of view in the main character's perspective. One gets to understand clearly why he or she does this and not that, why he or she reacts this way and not that and many other detailed questions that one asks himself or herself while reading a book or watching a movie. There may point details that a fiction book reader captures that a movie watcher can't get. For instance, my two friends Cadette and Bertine love stories. Cadette likes to read them while Bertine watching a movie to get the story. One day, Cadette read the book called "Me before you" by Jojo Moyes while Bertine watched its movie. When each finished they started highlighting their most interesting parts of the story. Then abruptly, Bertine said that she did not catch why John committed suicide at the end, then Cadette went on to explain the reason he did because that information was shown in John's thoughts in the book. This shows that as one reads a book, there are various little crucial details he or she gets that the one watching the movie does not get.
In a nutshell, even though the choice varies from person to person, I prefer reading fiction to watching a movie. The reasons are: one gets more out of the story while reading it than while watching its movie and it also boosts the suspense of the story which makes it even more interesting than sitting for around two to three hours watching a movie of the same story.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nd its movie at the same time. To some, its a hard decision to make, whether to wat...
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...story even more interesting. It arouses ones curiosity about what is going to happen...
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...that of a book reader because he or she is imagining a lot of things boosts up the suspense ...
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...e it really is a good story, however, I cant compare this feeling to the one I had w...
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...true. Whenever one reads a fiction book, one gets to deeply see in the minds of t...
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...ing the first point of view in the main characters perspective. One gets to understand cle...
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...ok reader captures that a movie watcher cant get. For instance, my two friends Cadet...
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...Cadette likes to read them while Bertine watching a movie to get the story. One d...
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... Moyes while Bertine watched its movie. When each finished they started highlighting...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, still, then, while, for example, for instance, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2611.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 584.0 407.700716846 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47089041096 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.91590194646 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27792956494 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.393835616438 0.524837075471 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 804.6 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8250077315 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7037037037 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6296296296 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81481481481 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160026451173 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575503945578 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512658853019 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127333370387 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037944295236 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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