Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
It goes without saying that today’s trend is to join and enjoy the invention of the internet. I have to admit that the internet is the best way to communicate, learn, teach, in a word it is the greatest invention of these centuries and it is going to evolve more and more. Some researchers say that the internet mostly used by younger whose age is about 30 and younger, however, I use to want to make sure these researchers that older people also use it and even more than younger. Everything is a double edged sword and I have tried to examine each state of the internet.
First of all, the internet has helped all by providing quick access to information. How? Actually, we don’t need to drive an hour to the library for getting the book and searching for necessary information, which is not guaranteed to have enough and crucial information. That is why, modern life provided us with the internet and we can get any information for our research paper, we can do it in few seconds by clicking. Apart from information for a research paper and so on, for everyday life people can get news with a help of internet.
Nevertheless, reading and finding from the internet ruins us to lose reading, searching skills. Going to a library may take hours but it would be more beneficial for future. Apart from special skills destroying it would destroy also our eyes, nervous system not in an obvious way but it razes slowly and cryptic.
To conclude in a word, as everything internet also double edged sword and we have to do our best to benefit from it as possible as we can do.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, apart from, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 285.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59298245614 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62034091655 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9770936213 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.083333333 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16665905719 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592374892311 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500194556533 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885534946243 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619277782698 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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